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by cptngarlock
Thu Jul 07, 2016 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pedagogy
Replies: 46
Views: 29423

Re: Pedagogy

8 years out this thing is still cash-money
by cptngarlock
Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 288501

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/18)

Ahaha, oh wow. Imagine my luck - I literally had fireworks exploding outside my window just as I started this latest chapter. Maybe it was meant to be. I think Leaty captured the one point I was thinking about as the arc came to a close: [...] Saki's outreach to Hisao still almost seems more like a ...
by cptngarlock
Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 368875

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

Just wanted to drop to say that I enjoyed this chapter, and like most everyone else, thoroughly appreciated the insight into Mr Satou - as someone else said, I initially wrote him off a little bit of a generic dramatic tool, rather than a more fully-fledged character in his own right (that is, I saw...
by cptngarlock
Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 300928

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

Another good chapter, as always. I still can't say I'm a fan of Yoshimura's involvement -- there's an aching in my bones that says it'll cause some horrid misunderstandings that, frankly, I'd expect better of. Otherwise, good chapter.
by cptngarlock
Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 199327

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

I don't know if I flinched, but I replayed Emi's route to write this chapter, and, yeah, I definitely thought "this. This is the moment where my readership turns on Iwanako." Obviously Iwanako has little idea of the gravity of what she said (she didn't even notice Emi's prosthetics,) but I thought ...
by cptngarlock
Wed Nov 20, 2013 11:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 199327

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

>Victorian memento mori daguerreotypes >lachrymose I by no means want to imply Iwanako isn't intelligent or well-informed, but...those two words strike me as 10-dollar words that even an intelligent teenager would not know, let alone use to describe something in their head. The idea that a Japanese ...
by cptngarlock
Sun Nov 10, 2013 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 368875

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/10]

Dammit, I got really excited that this got updated today!...and then I realized the 10th month of the year is October, not November. Goddamit...
by cptngarlock
Wed Sep 04, 2013 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 111
Views: 34687

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)

Hey, Muphrid, This is actually the second time I've read this, and it's only more entertaining the second time around. Thank you for providing such a compelling and well written story to the KS community. I was intrigued enough that I actually went ahead and read "The Coin" as well, and also loved i...
by cptngarlock
Sun May 05, 2013 6:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 368875

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

You know it's good writing when your reader ends up physically reacting to dialogue by yelling their opinions out loud; bravo. This is going to be one helluva wait for the next chapter. If I were Hisao, I wouldn't be looking forward to that paycheck at this point. While it's very much NOT the ethica...
by cptngarlock
Fri Apr 05, 2013 10:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 199327

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 3/06/2

Iwanako is easily one of the least explored characters in the game, and represents a major blank slate. I've always wanted to read KS from the perspective of a female "Hisao", but I've also been a little averse to pure OC routes, which is why I avoided them; therefore, seeing Iwanako, who is not a c...
by cptngarlock
Sun Mar 24, 2013 1:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 368875

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

Found this a day ago, and I'm popping in to tell you how thoroughly I am looking forward to whatever's coming up next. After this latest chapter, the first thing that popped into my head was this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8HZlWxtrfg
by cptngarlock
Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 386792

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

Forgive me for my intrusion, but I was wondering if someone could clear up my confusion. Suzu and Hisao had gotten pretty intimate twice so far, and I think both times clothes were taken off. Did Hisao's shirt ever get taken off? I remember reading something along the lines of "Most of Hisao's cloth...