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This is my first post, And I just want to say, I don't normally speak much, But when I get the honor to read something as nice as this. I feel I at least need to say something, Soo thank you so very much. It's so nice to see how close the KS Comunity is here. :D Please keep up the good work, if thi...

“I kind of...ran into a lot of people in my first little while here. Or sometimes they ran into me.” Hisao seems to be recounting something, but it goes over both mine and Lilly’s head. “Oh, before you forget, Hisao, perhaps you should Hanako what you told me,” says Lilly. 1. Lilly and Hanako were ...

~Behind my Scars, Chapter 6: Denouement. I had a nightmare; I awoke in a cold sweat, alone in my room. There are few feelings like it...The loneliness that comes with being alone when all you want is company is crippling. But I’m too nerve-wracked to even consider being upset. In my dream, Hisao fou...

This FanFic is written in such a frantic way that everything feels very disjointed. You're writing very short scenes with minor or major leaps ahead in the timeline that I don't feel like I follow an actual storyline but rather short flashes of it every here and there. -Snippy snippy- I think the p...

Well Hisao, everyone knows you get one punch, and only one punch, to knock someone out with one hit. You have used yours. In all seriousness, I like this fic so far. I also agree with Mirage though. The last of this chapter had Hisao acting out of character. While he does lash out in the VN a bit, ...

Its good to see that you've updated your story, however, I think I will update the word count only when your story is completed. All right, that's fair. Glad to have an entry in there all the same, and glad that this thread even exists! :D Should be a sticky, IMO. Like a table of contents, or an in...

Hmm... First of all I can't imagine a scene like that happening anywhere in Japan. But even if it did, Hisao's reaction is way out of character for him. I wouldn't really say it's so farfetched. Hisao presented with many outbursts in the VN, such as the bad ending for Act 1, and his mad dash during...

I'm not sure how things go with updating the list, but you can change the word count on Behind my Scars to ca. 9000. Because A NEW CHAPTER IS UP!~

~Behind my Scars, Chapter 5: What am I doing? It’s been two days since Hisao’s accident. We’ve since returned from Hokkaido, and class is back in session at Yamaku. I debated going to school today. My body screamed a negative response at me. Between the trauma of seeing Hisao nearly have a heart att...

Behind my Scars – Epilogue by Sapphire (In progress, ca. 7,000 words)
PoV: Hanako; Pairings: Hanako x Hisao; Begins: Immediately after Hanako's good end. [I.e., the kiss scene]
Remarks: Sex

There ya' go. I'm writing the next chapter as you read this.

After a long hiatus, I was summoned as if by fate by a sudden private message asking me to finish my abandoned story.

So, I won't make any promises. I'll let my work show for itself. If "Behind my Scars" shows up in the active threads again, it'd be wonderful to have it added.

I apologize for anyone who's been wondering what's happened to this story, or believed that it went dead - because it didn't! I've lost consistant internet access, and I've run into some personal issues that I won't bore everyone with, so I won't be able to update for some time. When I DO get back o...

KS itself is adult content, and I've never seen anyone punished for not designating their fanfiction as the same thing. Besides, you had your warning in the story itself, just like I've done before, and that serves the same purpose. Duly noted. Will remove off the front. >_> This is something I don...

... Rather than one of the parties involved "making the point in his/her head", I got the impression it was just a fleeting thought. If you experience something for the second time, a comparison with the first time (especially if the first time was kind of an epic fail for several reasons...

You definitely ran into some trouble early on, grammar wise. I'll focus on that before we get to the story itself. First, decide your tense. I glance over to my side, looking over at the driver seat. My sister looked more cheerful than I did Glance is present tense. You use 'over' twice, and it isn'...