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Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:52 pm
by Atario
Here's something I wrote for a one-shot contest (limit 2,000 words). It didn't win, but what the hey.

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:58 pm
by d2r
Was he being fired from Yamaku, or somewhere he worked prior to his employment there? If it's Yamaku being defunded, you might want to go into that a bit more - plus, I mean, a school doesn't just fold up on short notice. They need to finish the year etc.

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 10:14 pm
by Atario
Didn't you read it? I thought it was pretty clear from context…

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:01 pm
by AntonSlavik020
d2r wrote:Was he being fired from Yamaku, or somewhere he worked prior to his employment there? If it's Yamaku being defunded, you might want to go into that a bit more - plus, I mean, a school doesn't just fold up on short notice. They need to finish the year etc.
Judging by the fact that this takes place before the game, and Mutou mentions getting back into teaching, I thought it was pretty clear.

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:06 am
by d2r
It was late and I was tired. Now that I look at in the light of the morning, it is pretty obvious. :P

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:47 am
by Atario
You're forgiven :P

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2014 2:25 pm
by 81pi81
Is it an online competition? Can you provide a link?

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2014 6:29 am
by Atario
[Observes soundless food preparation]

Well… ok, I guess I can't link it, after all. Yes, it is/was online; it's over now anyway.