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Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 1:13 am
by lolawesome
>Hisao orders pizza
>Kenji delivers it and says "did someone order a pizza with EXTRA SAUSAGE???"
>BOW CHIKKA BOW WOW

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 4:02 pm
by Oddball
Brogurt wrote:
Oddball wrote:you can expect one more final chapter and then an additional extra chapter that doesn't quite fit but still goes along with the themes
Let me guess; you're gonna go full fluffandcrunch and write some CURAYZEE porn just for the attention
Crazy porn? Maybe.... just maybe...

But doing it for attention? nah. I figure if having almost the entire female cast of the game naked in the same room didn't already get people's attention then adding porn wouldn't help that much.

On an unrelated note, I couldn't figure out any reasons why Meiko, Akira, and Yuuko would have to share the same shower so that scene was dropped. :wink:

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 4:26 pm
by The Hero Hartmut
Oddball wrote:On an unrelated note, I couldn't figure out any reasons why Meiko, Akira, and Yuuko would have to share the same shower so that scene was dropped. :wink:
Public bath.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 4:35 pm
by Oddball
The Hero Hartmut wrote:
Oddball wrote:On an unrelated note, I couldn't figure out any reasons why Meiko, Akira, and Yuuko would have to share the same shower so that scene was dropped. :wink:
Public bath.
This story isn't called Public Bath Scenes! I can't sacrifice my artistic integrity for something as simple as additional nudity. :(


Note to self: Consider sequel possibilities.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 5:06 pm
by Hoitash
Oddball wrote:
The Hero Hartmut wrote:
Oddball wrote:On an unrelated note, I couldn't figure out any reasons why Meiko, Akira, and Yuuko would have to share the same shower so that scene was dropped. :wink:
Public bath.
This story isn't called Public Bath Scenes! I can't sacrifice my artistic integrity for something as simple as additional nudity. :(
Hey, at least you still have artistic integrity :)

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 5:38 pm
by nemz
Waiting for the inevitable turnabout... guy's showers being worked on and some of the girls displaying far less sensitivity while Hisao uses their facilities.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 5:46 pm
by Elcor
Well you could have Akria getting locked out of her apartment, boyfriend fight or he had to head to another town for a week or two and she left her keys in his apartment. She visits Lilly and thus bums a shower.
Meiko visits Emi and she gets covered in food and has to take a shower or something, and that is how Akria and her meet.
Yuuko brings them towels and gets covered in water from the water fight?

Or

There is another event at Yamaku and it is a big event so Akria and Meiko come to visit family, Yuuko is there to give information packs out. Long story short Akria and Meiko get drunk and sick, Yuuko takes them to bathroom/shower area and I'll leave the rest to you.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 8:09 pm
by Bagheera
Oddball wrote:On an unrelated note, I couldn't figure out any reasons why Meiko, Akira, and Yuuko would have to share the same shower so that scene was dropped. :wink:
Akira's easy, given how often she visits. The others . . . I got nothin'. Meiko would be awkward anyway given Emi.

(and I've never understood the appeal of Yuuko, so.)

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 10:28 pm
by Oddball
Bagheera wrote: Meiko would be awkward anyway given Emi.
Emi: God Damn it, mom! Why do you have to do this? None of my other friends moms have to show up to our sex parties. It's embarrassing!

Meiko: I'm just worried about you and want to be there for you, dear.

Emi: I told you, it's nothing! it's just a bunch of us girls getting together, stripping naked, and making out! Everybody does it! It's not like we're gay or anything, we even invited a boy this time and I don't want you to embarrass me in front of him!

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 10:52 pm
by Brogurt
Emi wouldn't just be embarassed, she'd be flat lol out outclassed by her mom so badly that she'd have to triple her sluttiness to keep up.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:11 pm
by Bagheera
Brogurt wrote:Emi wouldn't just be embarassed, she'd be flat lol out outclassed by her mom so badly that she'd have to triple her sluttiness to keep up.
But on the upside Emi's not losing the war against gravity, so she has that going for her.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 12:46 pm
by uwa
Bagheera wrote:But on the upside Emi's not losing the war against gravity, so she has that going for her.
But Meiko sure looks like the tide hasn't turned against her yet.

Getting Yuuko there is pretty easy: obviously she lives in a shitty old apartment with a really nasty shared bathroom, so she bathes at school. But now the showers she uses are full all the time, and in the library she overheard Lilly and Hanako talking about using Hisao's shower. She seems to know Lilly pretty well in Lilly and Hanako's paths, so with some frantic begging she managed to get herself invited.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:44 pm
by Oddball
Okay. Chapter 2 has been edited. I thank you all for your support.

Chapter 3 is ... kinda coming along. Still working on it. The good news is the chapter after that is almost finished so when I do update there won't be a huge gap between the updates.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:09 am
by Roamin12
Oddball wrote:Okay. Chapter 2 has been edited. I thank you all for your support.

Chapter 3 is ... kinda coming along. Still working on it. The good news is the chapter after that is almost finished so when I do update there won't be a huge gap between the updates.
I thought there were only three parts, but I'm not complaining.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:18 am
by Brogurt
Roamin12 wrote: I thought there were only three parts, but I'm not complaining.
I think we had a conversation at one point about the possibility of doing some crazy porn at one point, since he said he might continue past 3 chapters

Anyway, there will almost certainly be more shower scenes in one form or another