Re: Sleight Of Hand | Part 6 | 26/8/15
Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 5:20 pm
(Where's the Walkthrough?)
https://ks.fhs.sh/
Thanks Hes! Koharu is such an interesting character to me that I just couldn't stop myself from writing more.Hesmiyu wrote:Really liking this . And to think it started out as a one-shot that's now blossomed into 6 parts (at the time of me writing this)
Don't worry about it, Just a simple job to get it just how I wanted.Sharp-O wrote:Ah, I should have asked if you wanted to keep the original hair and eye colours
Though he is their boss, It's a small family diner, so I like the think that Hideaki treats them more like grandchildren than employees.Mirage_GSM wrote:Oh, and Hideaki is a given name, and they are probably not on first name basis with their boss, are they?
To be scarfed? that isn't a word either.Silentcook wrote:..."Scarven"? I understand what you mean, but I don't think that's really a word.
Shizune's glare follows the page, and so I decide to shelve any further questions in fear of having my eyes gouged out. My mind begins to play over the possibilities, but by the end of the lesson, I haven't come up with anything plausible.Where's Misha?
Suspended. Don't ask.
Don't you just despise her?Sharp-O wrote:... What is it with you and picking on Misha?
In the spirit of the topic, I'll share my favorite coin trick. (it actually works better with paper money, but quarters are okay too.)I just ended up learning a lot of card tricks, coins are next.
It's always been my headcanon that his mom has been over the top, I think that was solely formed when he mentions that his mother calls him Hicchan. That, and the character was based off Misaki from Sakurasou no pet, one of the most Genki girls I've seen.Oddball wrote:I like it so far. Your new characters are fun and original, even if Hisao's mom comes across as a bit too over the top.
I imagined the cast as one that'd give each other nicknames, not only with Koharu's dislike of her own name (But I didn't give her one for some reason?) but with the brother's names too.Oddball wrote:I'd lighten up on the necktie stuff though. Once was a nice reference but you're really pushing it now, unless you actually want them to officially give him Necktie as a nickname. Seems like something they might do.
It did help me place the characters, for sure. I always have images of character's in my mind when I write them, so having the readers think about those same images as I was when I was writing it might help.Oddball wrote:Casting pictures for your characters is actually something I tend to do myself. It always helps me having something to look at for quick reference. I've actually made a seating chart for Lilly's entire class for some of my stuff. Glad to see I'm not the only one that does that.
Anymore, huh?Oddball wrote:Oh, please don't use that light blue for text anymore. It's a bit hard to read.