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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Brogurt wrote:>You will never have a skullgun installed
>You will never kill someone without so much as raising a finger
>You will never have orange; you will be stuck forever with lemon-lime
Phew... For a minute there I thought you were going to bring up some awkward moments by saying something else after Lemon.

If you know what I mean.

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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LOL WUT wrote:
Brogurt wrote:>You will never have a skullgun installed
>You will never kill someone without so much as raising a finger
>You will never have orange; you will be stuck forever with lemon-lime
Phew... For a minute there I thought you were going to bring up some awkward moments by saying something else after Lemon.

If you know what I mean.

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Writing could have been better in spots. Could have been much worse in others. All in all, I liked it. Hanako's arc always reminded me of a particular song, and for some reason, this fanfic actually brought that feeling even more strongly.

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Malkav wrote:Writing could have been better in spots. Could have been much worse in others. All in all, I liked it. Hanako's arc always reminded me of a particular song, and for some reason, this fanfic actually brought that feeling even more strongly.

That awkward moment when you put a song on your ipod, but its in a language you don't speak.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Thanks for the kind words, guys. Glad you enjoyed it overall.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Still in the middle of reading this, but I have to say, this is one of my favorite hanako epilogues.
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Really good story. I am really happy that I read this. I have to admit... I cryed like a little girl at the end.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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And now i'm done.

I remove the qualifier. This is the best Hanako epilogue I've ever read.

Hell, it might even be the best KS epilogue fanfic I've ever read.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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themocaw wrote:And now i'm done.

I remove the qualifier. This is the best Hanako epilogue I've ever read.

Hell, it might even be the best KS epilogue fanfic I've ever read.
That's the most easily agreeable statement I've heard all year.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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themocaw wrote:And now i'm done.

I remove the qualifier. This is the best Hanako epilogue I've ever read.

Hell, it might even be the best KS epilogue fanfic I've ever read.
Could you give me a tl;dr? 10 hours seems kinda long
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Brogurt wrote:Could you give me a tl;dr? 10 hours seems kinda long
Takes place just after Hanako's good ending and deals with how Hanako handles Lilly's decision to leave for Scotland.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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themocaw wrote:
Brogurt wrote:Could you give me a tl;dr? 10 hours seems kinda long
Takes place just after Hanako's good ending and deals with how Hanako handles Lilly's decision to leave for Scotland.
If that's all and there's 17 chapters then those chapters must be kinda short
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Brogurt wrote:
themocaw wrote:
Brogurt wrote:Could you give me a tl;dr? 10 hours seems kinda long
Takes place just after Hanako's good ending and deals with how Hanako handles Lilly's decision to leave for Scotland.
If that's all and there's 17 chapters then those chapters must be kinda short
It explores theories of which I bring up in arguments considering canon such as, if Lilly would in fact leave for Scotland the second time if Hisao was in Hanako's life.
As well as that it also touches on how emotionally stable Hanako really is despite being with Hisao and other stuff of the same theme.
In my opinion, its the definitive canon for Hanako... So yeah, it's kinda worth the read :D
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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Thanks for the compliments guys.

Um, the story is essentially a continuation of Hanako's storyline from that kiss in public up to the point where Lilly's storyline ends in KS. (with the exception of the intermezzo which takes place at the time Lilly still lives in her parents' home with Akira instead of in the dorms) The story consists of two plotlines that more or less follow each other up.

One describes Hisao's and Hanako's budding relationship with the insecurities both still feel lurking in the background.

The other describes Hanako's determination to improve her friendship with Lilly beyond their initial mother-daughter bond and into the kind of friendship Hanako really wishes for...a motivation brought on by both her relationship-upgrade with Hisao and, secretly, a desire to pay Lilly back for the role she played in getting her a boyfriend.

It's rather slice-of-lifey at first, so it takes some time to pick up speed.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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his is one of the best stories I've read on this forum. Great work.
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