Compromised

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CrossRook
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nemz wrote: Indeed, and that's I think we should take this as set in the future of Emi's good end.
No comment.
Still, it should have been easy to put them together in the same scene where we see Emi's mom flirting with the nurse, just a passing mention like Lilly and Hanako were.
Maybe if I do Compromised v. 2.0...
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I liked it! Thank you for your work, you have quite some talent.
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Great story with some really well developed characters and a few nice references to the old cast.

Sae taking over Nomiya's place seemed a bit odd, but Misha's and Hideaki's appearances felt right.

The only real problem I had was the hostage situation at the very end. It just seemed too overly dramatic for the setting or the story you had been telling up until that point.
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