El Jay wrote: I fear for my wrist, gentlemen.
Ozymil wrote:El Jay wrote: I fear for my wrist, gentlemen.
Don't we all
Though small the changes may be, they make a big difference; it collectively looks much better, especially Shizune's awakening expression. Although, while I know that you intended to put Misha-hair on the teddy I can't help but see it as Rick James-hair instead. Perhaps make the drills a bit more... drilly?
Great work man, really do hope to see more of your work in the future.
Also, in response to boob size, we're talking a very loose fitting shirt/nightgown she's wearing, they're definately bigger than that.
Amadeous wrote:Also, in response to boob size, we're talking a very loose fitting shirt/nightgown she's wearing, they're definately bigger than that.
That just means they'd sag, not magically shrink down a few cup sizes. I'm not saying they have to be SHUT UP YOU TITTY MONSTER but they'd still definitely be larger than what you've got now.
Ozymil wrote:Too late, must sleep. But first, comments!
Now, I'm not too knowledgeable on art and such and I can't give you a "critic's review," but looking at this strictly from a geek's viewpoint, I like the panel placement simply because it seems to follow the "Golden Proportion."
Jesus, I'm lame.
On another note, while this may still be in the sketch stages I just want to point out that Shizune's legs look a bit too short. Positioning the "legpits" and adjusting accordingly could help.
Vysetron wrote:Does Shizune seem...really short to anyone else? Or was the image shrunk vertically? She seems to have rather stubby legs.
Other than that though, I'm liking it.
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