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Now You are probably thinking: "The Fuck did I just read!?" Good. That was the plan. Oh gawd! You atmosphere was brilliant however the pacing of your plot left something to be desired. Your one flaw was not writing Kenji in as the Hulk, and with that considered, I give "I am Haiso-ma...

I mentioned I was stuck on a section in the next chapter... Well, I'm jammed on about ten minutes worth of interaction between characters and I've rewritten them... oh... around thirty times so far. I've written everything leading up to it, and most of what happens after, but the little section I'm...

I looked to his epilogue mostly for aesthetics- Shizune's appearance is based his rendition- and the long engagement. The Misha I had wasn't really in line with his Misha, so the two fics couldn't work together as well as I may have liked. Fair enough. My lingering expectations were stuff like Mish...

Once again, I have stumbled upon a fanfic I had yet to read and once again I found myself reading it in one sitting then realising its currently 3am, yet still spending an extra 15-20 minutes to come up with a comment... It's a good story, especially your characterisation of Misha, which was both cl...

LOL WUT wrote: I don't know what the Fuck I am talking about!
So remember kids.
Never trust me when precentages are involved!

Hahahaha
You are one peculiar person I must say.

You are an Ass Face, you know that? With each new part we learn more about Hisao, and we progress into Yaso 's life, and then BAM Part is over and I have to wait for the next one. You Cock Tease. Note: ignore everything on the first part of my post. Just stick with the complements before someone ye...

Helbereth wrote: Satoru Miyoto

Satoru Iwata + Shigeru Miyamoto? Me thinks you're a Nintendo man.
OrmaybetheyarejustcommonnamesandI'mlookingtoomuchintoit ._.

Wow... Just wow. I've read the popular Ascended Flutist's "And to live in peace" , giggling childishly at their cutesy ways the entire time. (Bare with me for a sec, I do plan to go somewhere with this.) I've read Mehkanik's brilliant "After school" epilogue, which is one of the ...

“Fine.” I wedge the movies in my elbow and pull my wallet from pocket. As I open it, a single moth flies out, immediately heading for the fluorescent lamps lining the ceiling. We both stare after it for a few long moments. “Did that really just happen?” Hisao asks, continuing to stare. I lol'ed way...

Total Destruction wrote:ALMOST MAKES ME WANT TO LOOK UP SLEEP FETISH PRONZ BUT I WILL NOT BECAUSE I'M BETTER THAN THAT.

OH GAWD!!!?!
You worry me, mate.

"I know good things happen when you cant sleep until 6:30 a.m. everyday!" "Updated at 7:00pm" Helbereth, your timing makes me proud to be Aussie... Not that I'm saying your spout of insomnia is good or anything ._. Oh it's not a spout. I've had insomnia for years (all my life) o...

LOL WUT wrote: "I know good things happen when you cant sleep until 6:30 a.m. everyday!"

"Updated at 7:00pm"
Helbereth, your timing makes me proud to be Aussie... Not that I'm saying your spout of insomnia is good or anything ._.

I think I'm manly enough to admit this without being judged: When I got the email notification that this had updated... I kinda squealed with glee a little ._. I was kinda hoping Miki and Haiso would join Suzu under the tree but I can't complain with the alternative outcome. Panthour was right in sa...

Scissorlips wrote: I can legitimately say that my sleep schedule has been shot to hell since starting this story (I've also been taking more naps lately, strange)

-Giggles-
One could say you've almost become your character.

I think you've done very nicely trying to encapsulate the emotional state of Aiko, making her an intriguing and "hug-able" character. That "Almost kiss" scene was squeal-worthy grade adorable and I love Aiko's reaction to Haiso's heartbeat, shrugging it off as normal, that alone ...