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- Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11577
Reorientation
Chapter 3: Reorientation "Really, I'm disappointed in Mr. Yamamoto. I expected him to at least send a human soul to greet Nakai, not a mon-- er, that is..." Voices. That would be Chiasa, I think. Someone sighs. "I did explain to Mr. Yamamoto that it would have been best to send a huma...
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11577
Re: Kikai Shoujo
Kikai Shoujo ---> Machine Girl? Or is it Opportunity/Chance Girl? Somehow the former reminded me of 'Kikou Shoujou wa Kizutsukanai', so that definitely peaked my interest... I'm going by the romaji form of 奇怪, meaning weird, strange, or wonderful, depending on context. I got there from Yokai, which...
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11577
Re: Kikai Shoujo
You get a cookie.Elcor wrote:Nicely done, as for the fainting it could be that he wanted to so he did? *shrugs*
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Moonlight Sonata
- Replies: 23
- Views: 8541
Re: Moonlight Sonata
Man, I loved that game back in the 80's, you know I actually held the top score for two whole weeks at the local Funland Arcade?Elcor wrote:You are a magician of wor.
Oh, wait, now your just being too kind.Elcor wrote:words.
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11577
Taking a breather
Chapter 2: Taking a breather I'm not sure how long I've been standing here staring at the walls. At least I've had the presence of mind to get dressed. The uniform provided for me fits perfectly, I wonder how they knew my size. I take a few more minutes to try and evaluate how I feel about this unex...
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11577
Re: Kikai Shoujo
So dead people can have medical emergencies, need an education, and can be forced to work in perpetuity? :? Wow, that's a really shitty afterlife. Hm, all things will be revealed in good time. I expect the girls have also met an untimely demise, or it wouldn't make much sense to use any KS connecti...
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Moonlight Sonata
- Replies: 23
- Views: 8541
Re: Moonlight Sonata
My honest answer to that is no, I am not. Thanks for the kind words though.FishyBroski wrote:Loved your fics Oh and off topic, are you, by chance, an artist of any kind?
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11577
Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Table of Contents Chapter 1: Perchance to Dream (This post) Chapter 2: Taking a Breather Chapter 3: Reorientation Chapter 4: Total Recall/Rec Roomie You are about to enter another dimension. A dimension not only of sight and sound, but of mind. A journey into a wondrous land of imagination. Next st...
- Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Moonlight Sonata
- Replies: 23
- Views: 8541
Re: Moonlight Sonata
These are all three really great little stories! I really enjoyed the first, I love the idea of Shizune keeping something that she enjoys such a closely guarded secret, since she knows she'll never be the best at it. For the second one, I think you did a good job getting across the fear and despair...
- Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
- Replies: 50
- Views: 15657
Re: A Haiku for each girl!
Erm... beginners luck. The most poetry I've done before is dirty lymricsMirage_GSM wrote:I think those were the best ones yet.
They also capture the essence of Haiku best. There is more to it than just counting syllables...
- Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Stars and Stripes
- Replies: 28
- Views: 8722
Re: Stars and Stripes
Not my usual choice of subject matter, BUT, the characterizations are interesting and the prose is easy to read. I like short, sweet and to the point.
- Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Moonlight Sonata
- Replies: 23
- Views: 8541
Re: Moonlight Sonata
bradpara wrote:It means that as far as I am concerned, your stories are as "real" as the game is.# 2 wrote:Head canon? Sorry, I'm not up with the lingo.bradpara wrote:You've made my head canon with both of your stories.
Well done
Thanks for the complement
- Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Moonlight Sonata
- Replies: 23
- Views: 8541
Re: Moonlight Sonata
You've made my head canon with both of your stories. Well done Head canon? Sorry, I'm not up with the lingo. ------------ Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious I'm sitting on the school rooftop. It has been a long day, and I yawn. No one has been up here all day. No one but me. "Am I... bored?&qu...
- Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
- Replies: 50
- Views: 15657
Re: A Haiku for each girl!
I must have order. Within me, without others, I'll not compromise. -- Silvery moonlight, Your glory I'll never know, Lest my love tells me. -- What is the word for-- No, now it is forgotten, 'Tis lost in the clouds. -- My pain is my own, It's not ever to be shared, Except with you. -- Butterfly in f...
- Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Moonlight Sonata
- Replies: 23
- Views: 8541
Re: Moonlight Sonata
I'm not a writer, and I have some difficulty interpreting my thoughts into words. I hope that this captures the scene as it payed out in my mind. I somehow doubt it, but I tried. I know exactly what you mean. It can be really frustrating at times. But that, sir, is a neat and original piece of fict...