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Kayo12 wrote:>I hear an uncharacteristically feminine mewling from her
>coupled with a low grunt much more befitting his father.

I think it's supposed to be Akira and Hideki.

I'll put my support, whatever its worth, behind that.

YES, A double long dose! Seriously, this just made my week and with the turn of events of the last chapter I can't wait for the next addition.

This line "mobile drilling platform" I just lost it.

ouch...

it is well written.

It is interesting to see the inner thoughts of Lilly.

I too look forward to see the replies that are given to the questions that lolawesome asked.
I am looking forward to see more of your work none the less.

Wasn't expecting that from Rika, not surprising, just unexpected. How Rika returned his feelings that was a cute/sweet moment.

It was worth the wait.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Personally, I'm thinking of the Track Team Captain, but I know that is just to easy.

I feel I need to eat popcorn while reading.

One short chapter isn't much to go one thus far, but depending on how this plays out, 'Post Mortem' might be an appropriate title. It's a lot more... subtle than the current title, and much more intriguing than simply untitled . Aww, making fun of Wednesday. I am interested in seeing in how this pa...

I..just..damn, it just hits you hard.

it also made me think of this Walking In The Rain

Ritsu going at the bad blood angle, she's gonna get an ear full.

Wow. This is getting very interesting.

Personal Opinion, it seems like you've made Hisao open up more to Hanako earlier in his only week there.

BlackRockHanako wrote:

Hoitash wrote:It looks to be just a temp ban, though, so there's hope writing-wise.

It's permanent. You can find his writing in other places with a tiny bit of effort. (But it's not allowed to be posted here.)

Dang, thanks for saying so....and found it.

BlackRockHanako wrote:

lolawesome wrote:Aw man, why'd you end it right at the part I want to read more of? Face_Sad

Because he got banned, mainly.

Wow, that is unfortunate.

Will be interesting to see how this goes.