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- Thu May 12, 2011 9:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Most Surprising Thing (Now With Art Added!)
- Replies: 94
- Views: 47990
Re: The Most Surprising Thing
I don't know what to make of the chess scenarios. How you handle jumping back and forth at the end will be important.
- Thu May 12, 2011 8:52 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Are You Ready For Release?
- Replies: 228
- Views: 82048
Re: Are You Ready For Release?
Yeah I am a newcomer to KS. I was a /v/ lurker for two years, then I hopped to /a/ as /v/ really started to decline. Totally honest it was that Ritcher fella that got me into trying the game.
I can wait. Time goes by fairly fast if you learn how to deal with stuff.
I can wait. Time goes by fairly fast if you learn how to deal with stuff.
- Tue May 10, 2011 9:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Adventures of Sherlock Hisao!
- Replies: 20
- Views: 19855
Re: The Adventures of Sherlock Hisao!
You are right. It was a last second decision, I should remove it. I'll leave it for now.
- Tue May 10, 2011 11:36 am
- Forum: Blog posts
- Topic: Reach for the Stars
- Replies: 56
- Views: 75234
Re: Reach for the Stars
che-guevara.jpg Your feelings are valid, but I pretty much agree with all that was said on this topic in the blog. A good vn needs to be well written. For most of them, take out the pictures and and the descriptions of their surroundings and the people's appearances, and you have a decent book. The...
- Tue May 10, 2011 11:00 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Theory regarding Hanako's "dark tiles" game.
- Replies: 57
- Views: 23141
Re: Theory regarding Hanako's "dark tiles" game.
That is illogical. Clearly Hanako was a resistance fighter against Britannia, and "bishop" was the code name Lelouch gave her during missions. Her mecha was destroyed and her escae pod was hit. She escaped the crash landing severely burned but was unable to seek medical treatment as it wou...
- Tue May 10, 2011 10:48 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Blindness
- Replies: 42
- Views: 15292
Re: Lilly's Blindness
Did you see the Dark Knight? Her eye could look like Harvey Dent, aka Twoface.
- Tue May 10, 2011 10:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Adventures of Sherlock Hisao!
- Replies: 20
- Views: 19855
Teetering on the edge of the Precipice called Love
My internet went out last night, so I went to sleep after I finished. Another piece working to improve dialogue, any comedy here is much more subtle. Any other critiques? I don't think I'll be able to practice inner monologues with this story. That'll be my weakest point for a while. WITHOUT FURTHER...
- Mon May 09, 2011 6:53 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Stem Cell Treatment?
- Replies: 24
- Views: 8986
Re: Stem Cell Treatment?
I think having the panties say "bush" would have been funnier.
- Mon May 09, 2011 6:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Ties that bind. LillyxHisao 18+ Chapter 5 up!
- Replies: 32
- Views: 19921
Re: The Ties that bind. LillyxHisao 18+ Chapter 5 up!
I found Kenji's part to be the most enjoyable.
- Mon May 09, 2011 6:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New stuff of Neuman|| Katawamon: Welcome to Ceridian Forest
- Replies: 101
- Views: 48675
Re: New stuff of Neuman|| Katawamon: Welcome to Ceridian For
I only read the death note and pokemon stories. I had a pokemon idea but scrapped it for sherlock holmes. I'll have to give mine some thought so it isn't too similar to yours.
- Mon May 09, 2011 4:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Blindtan vs Hisaoman, game updated 05/15
- Replies: 53
- Views: 44779
Re: Hisaoman: Flash Game v2
I'm a dude. I should do the writting sometime before I go to sleep. It's harder to catch the typos. I also accidentally a word somewhere. I'll get to this sequel REAL soon.
- Mon May 09, 2011 2:04 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Blindtan vs Hisaoman, game updated 05/15
- Replies: 53
- Views: 44779
The adventures of HISAOMAN
You jump over the chasm and land on the conveyor belt. You run forward with the belt, megabuster blasting. Large mechanical spider creatures are crawling all over the ceiling, following you. Slowly they descend upon you, as you make your way through the old art gallery. You let lose a fully charged ...
- Sun May 08, 2011 11:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Blindtan vs Hisaoman, game updated 05/15
- Replies: 53
- Views: 44779
Re: Hisaoman: Flash Game v2
Looks like I beat it. You could say that I've fallen for this game.
- Sun May 08, 2011 11:23 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: KS CYOA threads
- Replies: 2759
- Views: 849187
Re: KS CYOA threads
Despite what the spammer says, bromont's got real writting talent. He throws in a ton of references if he likes, but he is very original. Don't imitate him, just improve.
- Sun May 08, 2011 1:09 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Theory regarding Hanako's "dark tiles" game.
- Replies: 57
- Views: 23141
Re: Theory regarding Hanako's "dark tiles" game.
I've gone to a store that had more than two different colored tiles. There were the white ones, the gray ones, the black ones, and the light blue ones. They followed a general layout, and we had to stick to the grey and blue ones. They weren't entirely orderly either, occasionally having to jump acr...