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- Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 427630
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}
Also, the sentence right before the neurothekeoma one (d'oh!) starts with a lowercase letter. Now going over the whole scene with a fine-toothed comb because I shudder to think what I'll miss next. (First check: good, I didn't misspell my own username when I registered to this forum.) The Head Nurse...
- Fri Sep 05, 2014 7:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 427630
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!]
So I reread it all, and it was awesome. Thank you. I'm not good at the commenting, so here's some nitpicking instead: Ah, and it looks like you needed a neurothekioma removed, too. Neurothekeoma. Sorry, there aren't a lot of nits to pick. Oh wait, the title! { [ UPDATED 2014-9-5!] } Syntax error, br...
- Fri Sep 05, 2014 4:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 427630
Re: Scene Fourteen
The previous chapter link goes... to the start of the story. I was meaning to reread it all anyway, but is this really only chapter two?Leaty wrote:You should probably reread the last chapter before looking at this. Yes, even if you just checked it yesterday. Browse through it.
- Fri Sep 05, 2014 2:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 751150
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 9/4
I think Lilly has a point there. Relationships are built on trust, and if Hanako is not willing to trust Hisao that far, any relationship she might have with him would be kind of abusive. At the very least, there would be a long road ahead of them. I think this is one of the reasons why Hanako's ro...
- Mon Sep 01, 2014 11:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 112
- Views: 51015
Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/1
“I’m more into stouts myself,” Lynda replied, “probably from growing up in cold weather. Generally prefer liquor, too, but that’s beside the point.” Lynda nodded, “I hear that. One of the nice things about Scotland is the beer.” Just the prospect of beer gets her talking to herself? The fish, weath...
- Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
- Replies: 351
- Views: 207551
Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]
Days like today (8/8) would also be fine.forgetmenot wrote:I think to avoid confusion I'll just update after the 12th of every month from now on.
- Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 427630
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}
The Japanese Wikipedia article on it has a section on how the media has been calling child rapist-murderers 少女愛者 shoujoaisha since 1989. The "love between girls" meaning is presented as specifically being related to the Yuri genre. How about 同性愛 douseiai? It's the general term for homosexu...
- Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
- Replies: 496
- Views: 373258
Re: The great fan fiction archive
[b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6440]The Haunting: A Love Story[/url][/b] by [b]Merumegu[/b] (ongoing, ca. 62.300 words) [b]PoV: [/b] Hisao; [b]Pairings: [/b]Hisao x Shizune; [b]Begins: [/b]during Shizune Act 2 [b]Remarks: [/b]Character death, paranormal Currently listed as aban...
- Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
- Replies: 496
- Views: 373258
Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -03/07/14
The Begins tag could use standardizing for searchability. Here are some inconsistencies I found: After Act 1 <name> end | After Act 1 - <name> end // the dashless version is more common overall, but all "During act 1 - <day|scene>" descriptions use the dash During <name>( route)* Act [2-4]...
- Fri Jul 11, 2014 12:47 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Recommend a VN
- Replies: 1746
- Views: 701162
- Sat Jul 05, 2014 3:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 125444
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
Haruki
Hakuri
You spell it Hakuri more often than not, but that's a girl's name (according to ENAMDICT anyway; never seen it myself) so I assume his name is actually Haruki. Hakrui is not a valid Japanese name.Hakrui
- Fri Jul 04, 2014 8:15 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Why does Hisao only have a condom in 1 route? *SPOILERS*
- Replies: 52
- Views: 22113
Re: Why does Hisao only have a condom in 1 route? *SPOILERS*
http://www.smbc-comics.com/index.php?db ... 2335#comicSpecimenSix wrote:I'm pretty sure it's physically impossible to put one on sexily.SpunkySix wrote:Have you tried putting it on sexily?metalangel wrote:Few things kill the moment more effectively than having to produce, open, and put on a condom.
- Sat Jun 21, 2014 1:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 58846
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [One Shot: 3/25]
Ikezawa. Her name is Pondswamp Flowerchild."No. It wasn't one of the first years that are in that gossip rag. I ran into that girl from your class, Izekawa."
- Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:54 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Recommend a VN
- Replies: 1746
- Views: 701162
Re: Recommend a VN
So out of all these pages of replies... which ones are the ones that are agreed to be the closest to KS? Right now I'm downloading Yume Miru Kusuri. White Album 2. Come to think of it, no other VN I've read is really anything like either of them. Unfortunately the translation project is looking lik...
- Tue Jun 17, 2014 6:11 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: "Twofold" Visual Novel (ft. Suriko) full release available now!
- Replies: 16
- Views: 21384
Re: "Work in Progress" Act 1 demo release
Pet peeve: auto-continue wait time should be be two parameters: per-character time (independent of the text speed) plus a per-line delay (could also add a third parameter - a delay for line breaks). And there's no reason not to let the user specify numerical values for these. Key perfected it all so...