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by Vempele
Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 427630

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}

Also, the sentence right before the neurothekeoma one (d'oh!) starts with a lowercase letter. Now going over the whole scene with a fine-toothed comb because I shudder to think what I'll miss next. (First check: good, I didn't misspell my own username when I registered to this forum.) The Head Nurse...
by Vempele
Fri Sep 05, 2014 7:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 427630

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!]

So I reread it all, and it was awesome. Thank you. I'm not good at the commenting, so here's some nitpicking instead: Ah, and it looks like you needed a neurothekioma removed, too. Neurothekeoma. Sorry, there aren't a lot of nits to pick. Oh wait, the title! { [ UPDATED 2014-9-5!] } Syntax error, br...
by Vempele
Fri Sep 05, 2014 4:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 427630

Re: Scene Fourteen

Leaty wrote:You should probably reread the last chapter before looking at this. Yes, even if you just checked it yesterday. Browse through it.
The previous chapter link goes... to the start of the story. I was meaning to reread it all anyway, but is this really only chapter two?
by Vempele
Fri Sep 05, 2014 2:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 751150

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 9/4

I think Lilly has a point there. Relationships are built on trust, and if Hanako is not willing to trust Hisao that far, any relationship she might have with him would be kind of abusive. At the very least, there would be a long road ahead of them. I think this is one of the reasons why Hanako's ro...
by Vempele
Mon Sep 01, 2014 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 51015

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/1

“I’m more into stouts myself,” Lynda replied, “probably from growing up in cold weather. Generally prefer liquor, too, but that’s beside the point.” Lynda nodded, “I hear that. One of the nice things about Scotland is the beer.” Just the prospect of beer gets her talking to herself? The fish, weath...
by Vempele
Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 207551

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]

forgetmenot wrote:I think to avoid confusion I'll just update after the 12th of every month from now on. :wink:
Days like today (8/8) would also be fine. :wink:
by Vempele
Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 427630

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

The Japanese Wikipedia article on it has a section on how the media has been calling child rapist-murderers 少女愛者 shoujoaisha since 1989. The "love between girls" meaning is presented as specifically being related to the Yuri genre. How about 同性愛 douseiai? It's the general term for homosexu...
by Vempele
Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 373258

Re: The great fan fiction archive

[b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6440]The Haunting: A Love Story[/url][/b] by [b]Merumegu[/b] (ongoing, ca. 62.300 words) [b]PoV: [/b] Hisao; [b]Pairings: [/b]Hisao x Shizune; [b]Begins: [/b]during Shizune Act 2 [b]Remarks: [/b]Character death, paranormal Currently listed as aban...
by Vempele
Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 373258

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -03/07/14

The Begins tag could use standardizing for searchability. Here are some inconsistencies I found: After Act 1 <name> end | After Act 1 - <name> end // the dashless version is more common overall, but all "During act 1 - <day|scene>" descriptions use the dash During <name>( route)* Act [2-4]...
by Vempele
Fri Jul 11, 2014 12:47 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 701162

Re: Recommend a VN

CoffeeDrive wrote:(As a side note, I touched her boobs and the country declared war on me)
Thus, Boob Wars. :mrgreen:
by Vempele
Sat Jul 05, 2014 3:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 125444

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Haruki
Hakuri
Hakrui
You spell it Hakuri more often than not, but that's a girl's name (according to ENAMDICT anyway; never seen it myself) so I assume his name is actually Haruki. Hakrui is not a valid Japanese name.
by Vempele
Fri Jul 04, 2014 8:15 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Why does Hisao only have a condom in 1 route? *SPOILERS*
Replies: 52
Views: 22113

Re: Why does Hisao only have a condom in 1 route? *SPOILERS*

SpecimenSix wrote:
SpunkySix wrote:
metalangel wrote:Few things kill the moment more effectively than having to produce, open, and put on a condom.
Have you tried putting it on sexily?
I'm pretty sure it's physically impossible to put one on sexily.
http://www.smbc-comics.com/index.php?db ... 2335#comic
by Vempele
Sat Jun 21, 2014 1:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 58846

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [One Shot: 3/25]

"No. It wasn't one of the first years that are in that gossip rag. I ran into that girl from your class, Izekawa."
Ikezawa. Her name is Pondswamp Flowerchild.
by Vempele
Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 701162

Re: Recommend a VN

So out of all these pages of replies... which ones are the ones that are agreed to be the closest to KS? Right now I'm downloading Yume Miru Kusuri. White Album 2. Come to think of it, no other VN I've read is really anything like either of them. Unfortunately the translation project is looking lik...
by Vempele
Tue Jun 17, 2014 6:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: "Twofold" Visual Novel (ft. Suriko) full release available now!
Replies: 16
Views: 21384

Re: "Work in Progress" Act 1 demo release

Pet peeve: auto-continue wait time should be be two parameters: per-character time (independent of the text speed) plus a per-line delay (could also add a third parameter - a delay for line breaks). And there's no reason not to let the user specify numerical values for these. Key perfected it all so...