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brythain wrote: Shizune got her work done.

Two questions. You refer to your SO as Shizune? And do you do so to her face?

Keep reading until you have a firmer grasp on literary technique. This is honestly the most useful piece of advice that you are going to receive. You mention reading VN's, but straight up fiction is different because you don't have visual accompaniment. Your writing comes off as very mechanical bec...

Mrs Minami, “I was going to play another game with Mi,” ... Like how nice my Mummy used to smell before she went out on dates, Miss Minami That was a very sudden divorce for the poor caretaker. “Hmmm,” Mi’s large amber eyes survey the board from her perch on the windowsill, “Knight to C5” She calls...

Disclaimer: The views expressed by characters in this fanfic do no necessarily reflect the views of the author. ------------------ 28 Years Later “For those of you just tuning in, we just heard Senator Walmart’s eloquent concession speech. Right now, we’re standing outside the campaign headquarters ...

Mutou headcanon inbound~ Related, but I'm sure already mentioned, is that some of the staff like to make bets on some students. Just to pass the time. Ha! I think most teachers do that kind of thing, consciously or not... and I'm quite sure Nurse is the guy holding the pot for those bets. Am I the ...

Damn, that's cold Suzu. I'm as curious as Seiki to find out who she was pre-mysterious event.

bubeez wrote:“Who am I?”

I am completely incapable of taking this line seriously ever since watching Scrubs which kind of ruined the effect you were going for. But that's my failing, not yours.

Another enjoyable update. I really like how you've portrayed Miki's relationship with her absent parents. I know I complained about the pacing, but I do want to say I feel like the relationship has developed into a very believable place. I also usually hate dream sequences in stories, but because yo...

But how could Shizune arrange Hisao's heart attack if nobody knew about his congenital heart defect before? How dare you bring logic into this! But seriously, I messed up and this is an artifact of the fact that I found it impossible to write Misha as a gleeful psychopath. Let's just say that Shizu...

I was hesitant to start this story since amnesia seems like such a cliche, but I'm really glad I gave this a chance. This last chapter is especially a knock out. Exploring how memories, or lack thereof, shape a person leads to some fascinating places. I am eagerly awaiting the continuation of the st...

Atario wrote:Clever Girl: All characters replaced by dinosaurs. All dialogue and inner monologue replaced by dinosaur onomatopoeia. Keep your eyes peeled for an added Archer cameo.

I can see it already. Shizune would be a raptor, Emi an ornithomimid, and Rin would be a T-rex.

I wonder if our world only exists because someone, somewhere, imagined it into being. Ha, and what a jerk he must be, eh? If only she knew... I give an easy chuckle behind my fist. "It's nice to meet you, too, but my name is Shizune Hakamichi. This is Mikado." Misha picks up on my introdu...

In so many words? I forgot college was a thing. Damn it, Blank, you went to college! You just forgot four years of your life, didn't you?! Blizzard games or alcohol? My first thought on finishing the story was that it was too short. I'm with Leaty, I want to see more of this friendship so bad now. ...

Iwanako Creepypasta with bonus Leaty cameo Well this got weird really fast. I'm honored, but mostly very confused. It's a nice story, although a bit dry, and I'm not sure why they need Hisao to be a citizen. (AAlthough I like that you didn't tell us, in a way. It's something of a Noodle Situation.)...

Etokie wrote:And now I got the theme song stuck in my head......

Mission Accomplished!

I wrote something else. You all write amazingly detailed beautifully crafted stories and it inspires me to write... this. I don't get it either. Anyway, this story is dumb and I feel dumb having written it. With expectations hopefully lowered, enjoy. Or don't. ---------------- Looking up, Shizune no...