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Very good, and a good portrayal of a 'what if' scenario, though there are a few mistakes, or poorly worded parts. He had screwed beyond repair up with her That sounds a little awkward. "He screwed up beyond repair with her." sounds a little better, but still a little clunky. It was impres...

So, on a whim I decided to take a break from the 50+ page epic I've been working on and do a quick tangent. As implied in another thread, I had been thinking about what might have happened if Hisao had not come to Yamaku. This was the result. It's kind of like "It's a wonderful life," but ...

Maybe you could make it as "it's a wonderful life" style tale where Hisao winds up seeing what would have happened if he hadn't come to Yamaku, and is given a chance to make things right. Do you think you might do that? If you just do it as is, it would be a really depressing story. The p...

I shall undoubtedly make the attempt to expand upon this. It wasn't my goal so much to write a depressing hypothesis. More as to show that one person regardless of their understanding of their own self worth can invariably impact the lives of those around them. Thank-you for the constructive advice...

This is good stuff! Please write more!

Depressing. But i suppose it just goes to show that the right man, in the right place, in the right time, can make an entire world of difference. For everyone. I like to think that even the characters who fall by the wayside in the routes you take are touched enough to go on to achieve great things ...

Excellent fic. Made me feel a lot better about Rin's neutral ending. One thing though, perhaps I'm an idiot but I still don't understand what "You can see the elephant in the boa" means. Can you please spell it out for me? It's in reference to a book called The Little Prince. One of the p...

Excellent fic. Made me feel a lot better about Rin's neutral ending. One thing though, perhaps I'm an idiot but I still don't understand what "You can see the elephant in the boa" means. Can you please spell it out for me?

That is an EXCELLENT blog post. I loved it so much i custom made a T-shirt with several of the sayings on it. Thank you for posting it.

Nakasaro-San wrote:Is this thread dead? I really loved the story, but I'm starting to wonder when more will come...






Woe is me.

I don't think its dead. I messaged Vektar and she said she was still working on it, it just sounded like she had a lot of things coming up.

I really, really hoped I wouldn't have to do this, but I am officially burnt out on this one for now. I'm very sorry, and I promise it'll be finished soon, but this post is basically to let you guys know that this story is going to be the last one of my ongoing ones finished, purely because I am ou...

I liked it! Thank you for your work, you have quite some talent.

Ah man, don't give up on your own writing! Just keep plugging away! Yeah, like I said I was really considering it, but in the end I just decided on keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. Apparently it worked! Don't worry, I haven't given up. I've written about fifty pages so far and probably...

God. That was sad. Especially that bit with Kenji. I'm actually crying.

I'm patient. Can I have a link to Salty Tears when you're done? You can check up on the team's progress here: http://www.saltysaltystudios.blogspot.com/ I wanted to thank you for writing this fanfic. I had been in a great deal of anxiety after glancing over another very disturbing fic, but this one...