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Brogurt wrote:

Elcor wrote: A few rounds totaling all of 5 minutes that consist of grunts and moans that ultimately ends in the disappointment of five girls?

>Death
>disappointing
really now

I don't know it has something to deal with a heart condition and his poor foresight to buy aids for the bedside.

hisao gets with every girl Final chapter, lilly comes back from scotland and joins orgy HAREM ENDING Nothing but logical. Hisao has to compensate for a bad heart, guess where it goes. A few rounds totaling all of 5 minutes that consist of grunts and moans that ultimately ends in the disappointment ...

I do apologize, I was unaware of the special meaning behind "fat".

Brogurt wrote:Not loving the formatting.

If I were you, and I swear I told this to someone before, I'd turn all single breaks into double breaks.

I haven't actually read the story yet. I hope you now know why.

You can read it Brogurt...its worth a "fat" comment in end.

Very nice addition.

Interesting I look forward to seeing this unfold.
If you don't mind me asking will your writing take this story to the festival?

What! Playing Ghost Recon how could you XD Sorry just messing with you.

I'm thinking of two people who might appear at the Shanghai, however one isn't that fitting of the criteria.

I liked the story, that being said have you given a thought to finding a proofreader? Thank you :) Yeah, you can say that. I try improve my english too :) So sorry if my english little bit awkward again No need to apologize, I only brought up a proofreader since you could compare the two afterwords...

Aww, I remember those invisible lines that made you stick out like a sore thumb. Oh, Nostalgia.
You got me thinking this is heading towards a Lilly x Hisao couple area.

I liked the story, that being said have you given a thought to finding a proofreader?

Beautifully written, I would say more but I can't think of the words to convey them correctly.

I agree with DanjaDoom.

As for which girl it fits it would all of them, since its obscure in key details.

One such fan fiction that mentions Niji was written by chaix called Flurries, a Flower, and crazy Females . It is a great story, personally I would recommend reading A Demon's Visit before hand. And don't feel to bad about making Akira into an incestuous female who is also into boys who could be mis...

Best of luck with the job hunt, hope you get something soon.

This is what happens when Kenji doesn't push you off the roof at the end of act 1.