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The story is set an undetermined amount of time after the good end. We'll learn more about Hanako's relationship with Hisao and how it started to go downhill a bit in the next few chapters.

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JTC545 wrote:Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)

I felt like changing the plot's progression to be a little bit slower-paced. Instead of jumping right in, I had Len Mao stick to his word from Chapter 2 and start Hanako off small. It's changed on Pastebin now too.

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A well written story and an interesting plot, I wonder what hisao would think if hanako dissaperd after a fight. We're probably going to find out! :wink: Thank you all for your comments so far, no matter how uncertain they may be. I'm looking forward to this as much as the rest of you, after all.

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Yesssss, I have been waiting for this, and I see you edited my art into the last chapter. Hooray! This is the bed thing!

(do not ask about "I am the bed". the answer is "japanese mario kart voice clips".)

I spoke to Scissorlips about this in private so he's already heard me say this, but one of the hardest parts of writing a route in text format is having multiple endings, because unless you explicity state "this is the end of this branch" there are sure to be people who don't pick up on it...

To elaborate: Scissorlips wrote: Previous I First To super-elaborate: please give the previous two/three chapters one more read-through. Er, I don't get it. I think maybe one or both of us are misinterpreting the other's words. When I said about the milli-scene and the next chapter, I was referring...

DanjaDoom wrote: You played my hand

It is a work of art. You so money, DanjaDoom. <3

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He meant the part about skinning said grapes, not eating them. I guess skinning grapes is a thing people do! I did not know that.

I really really enjoyed this story. I don't have much else to say other than that but it was certainly a refresher to read through!

A word of advice: Capital letters in appropriate spots. You should probably use them!