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Thanks for the kind words, guys. Glad you enjoyed it overall.

Not to mention the fact there's no difference between a "STOPSTOPSTOP I don't want to come yet", a "STOPSTOPSTOP that angle is uncomfortable" or a "STOPSTOPSTOP you're fucking killing me". (and I do mean fucking killing) Emphatizing with people isn't exactly Shizune's s...

On topic, I don't disagree with you all saying that how the choice determines Hisao's mindset, but I think maybe things were rushed a bit in the end. Hisao begins to develop this "White Knight" feeling throughout Acts 1 to 3, which are a lot more than last half of Act 4. It's a little bit...

She did tie him up, but he allowed her to. The only iffy thing about it is once his hands are tied he's unable to tell her to stop or slow down in case his chest starts hurting. Shizune might not be able to tell the difference between his O-face and his Hnnng-face and literally screw him to death. S...

What the choice does (to a much greater degree than is immediately obvious) is determine Hisao's mindset. Hisao's mindset at that point in time is in "savior"-mode and Lilly getting on the plane to Europe causes him to feel like he's left "in charge" of Hanako making it even wors...

Thanks for the compliment, but I'm not really sure at this point. I've never written fanfics before and this story came about completely by coincidence by two separate discussions on this forum. One of them explained Lilly's presence in Shizune's bad route by suggesting she stuck around in order to ...

I always in my head likened that scene to the fire that scarred her; it's definitely bad and it definitely would have been better if it had not happened but it's in the past and dwelling on it any further won't change shit. That's kind of an exaggeration, I think. Comparing a premature sexual encou...

Thanks. I felt that in KS, Hanako judged her perceived value in other people's eyes by how useful she thought she was to them and I thought that was a pretty good trait to keep in there for this story since it's a bit of a double-edged knife. On the one hand by giving a slightly positive twist on it...

I suspect lots of people don't find Hisao to be relatable because his situation isn't relatable to a lot of people. (how many people have experienced long-term hospital stay and being diagnosed with a lifethreatening condition before being dropped off at a completely new school and a completely new ...

Makes you wonder if Raita woud had gotten a team to work on KS back in 2001. Somehow, I'm kinda relieved that didn't happen. Maybe I'm too cynical, but I can't help but feel that if that had been the case KS probably would have turned out to be everything its jump-to-conclusions-detractors said it ...

Thanks for the comments. Wait so a Hanako bad ending and a Lilly Good ending within a Hanako good ending? ENDCEPTION! The only thing missing was Akira taking her boyfriend to Scotland with her. I had a little part in mind for the last telephone conversation between Lilly and Akira where the former s...

That's not a bad way to put it.

Stuff without parenthesis or quotes is simply narration. And yeah, it's pretty large. Or rather...I dislike episodic releases in both stories and games. So instead of posting one chapter, answering comments for a week, writing another one, retconning the half of the first one, writing two more, gett...

Posted all chapters.

Edit: Stuff in quotes is said. Stuff in parenthesis is thought.

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.