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griffon8 wrote:Yeah…

I think I'll just stick to the fact that your first three uses of the word 'it's' should be 'its'.

I don't think I want to comment any further.

It's getting late, my mind is running on full blown 'what the fuck was that' mode right now.

Yeah... Just take the title as a warning. The End Isn't What You'll Be Expecting (Quick Story #1 - Approx. 15 minutes spent writing) I wake in a fit of panic, my body numbingly returning from a horrible state of unconsciousness for the first time ever. My eyes squint at the single dangling light ab...

Interesting. The language makes me think of it as rather like a Shakespearean play. Nobody actually ever talked like that, but it's an interesting story element. There's a reason the story is written the way it is. As I've said to some others previously, every single thing that is and is not writte...

I really appreciate the kind words. Well done! I can't stress that enough. Hell, this is my first post on these forums even! As for that line, it was actually meant to be a bit of tongue in cheek. He kind of was meant to sort of come off like he was still a bit upset that she stole his money, and no...

This seems delightfully familar... Are you perchance a reincarnated Chaucer? Regardless if you are or not, color me intrigued :) The language thing didn't really bother me, but as a historian (albeit nineteenth century US, not Middle Ages) I'm probably not a good benchmark. I wish I was Chaucer rei...

So, I've been mulling this idea for quite a while: a medieval look on a spiritual journey for our OH so lovely protagonist: Mister Hisao Nakai. The approach to the story is different from anything I've ever written, so please go at least slightly easy on dialogue and some of the various situations y...

Enjoyed this chapter quite a bit. I know absolutely nothing about billiards, other than I'm completely shit when I play, so the idea that her going flawless doesn't bother me too much.

Keep up the good work, friend.

Po1ntBlank wrote:

Helbereth wrote:

Po1ntBlank wrote:Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)

I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.

He wrote the story live in the steam group some of us chill in, as he almost always does.

Sort of intrigued to see how these changes work out. Obviously with all of the other pseudo route characters, nobody has had to side step an already established relationship and put it into a reasonable context. That being said, I'm interested in seeing how they actually (and imminently) manage to g...

MrDan wrote:Mission accomplished, good sir. You managed to write something decently sexy that also made me legitimately guffaw, and that's an impressive feat.

Heh, glad you enjoyed.

Yeah, there's a lot of sex in here. This was just meant to be awkward, funny and sexy all in one. Sorry if the dialogue is shit, I cannot into. A Sweet Competition (Halloween Special) I yawn as I close the door on our final visitor of the night, the moon shining high in the sky as the time continue...

>Not making your avatar something suggestive

Here, try (and crop a part from) something like this:


Beyond that, this route will be suitable to my tastes. I commend your godly work, my friend.

The erotic king has graced his presence on the renai? 'Tis indeed a great day for mankind.

Loosely based off some earlier Miki stories I wrote. A Dream I squint my eyes and stretch my arms, coming out of a fresh bout of horrible sleep. Reaching up, I wipe the remains of slumber away, looking out the window of the train as it continues to rattle along it's restricted path. Shit, what time...

The Next Step I continue to hustle around the kitchen, my apron flapping around I practically sprint across the room from the stove to the small table we have off to the side. It's a beautiful night out, the moon giving ample lighting as it cascades through the window and onto the table. I run down...