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I'm guessing like 7 or 8 years old, but I'm not really sure at all.

No one seems to comment on your story update, which is weird. Keep up the good work man.

Keep up the good work and good luck on your finals.

Holy cow how have I not read this before?!

Just a couple of things I found weird here. "You wasn't talking that much" You weren't talking that much. "It'd take a long time to explain everything", I said "but the short version is that you got into that position yourself". "Not a thing", I said Suzu got ...

Hisao is a robot?!

I like your story, but I noticed you barely use question marks and exclamation points. When I read your story, I feel like everyone is talking in a monotone voice and I'm not totally sure when people are excited or asking real questions.

Haha, gaylord.

I knew it was in the future but I didn't know it was that far. Is the year 2025 or more?

Please tell me there's hoverchairs!

So, does rosemary have something to do with the pit or did I miss something?

Vekter wrote: “... Wait, if she's deaf, then why does she wear glasses?”

Did you get this from the "GIMME THE CHOCOLATE HISAO" Comic?

Very nice! His family sounds like they're huge buttholes though, I hate people like that.

I look forward to reading the rest of your work!


Also, the only error I noticed was here.

atw_ah wrote:No one would want to see me, in fact, no ever did.

I only run into a two of people, there are only this many due to the fact it is only 6:30 AM, most people will still be enjoying their sleep right now, This part right here was a little hard to read, maybe you might want to rephrase it. Anyways, loved it as usual. Perhaps in the next one though you...

I'm really digging the story man, even if it's kinda confusing me because it's not cannon. You also still have a few grammatical errors here and there, but with each post I notice less.

Keep going with it, I'm looking forward to reading more!