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I think a prequel could be interesting, particularly a part showing Hanako meeting Tenshi and all his efforts to woo her - I know you mention that he bought her lots of gifts and other stuff, and i'm not suggesting a scene like this to say, 'Oh my god what woman could refuse him! Surely it's not Han...

I dunno, I think it works fine the length it is right now, and some of the imagery is certainly...powerful.

Enjoyed it, as with all of your stuff.

lolawesome wrote:I'm thinking more along the line of she's already pregnant

Oh gods, if Hanako was pregnant and only wanted to sleep with Hisao so she could pretend it was his...the delicious anger on the forums!

Mealforthree wrote:

BlackRockHanako wrote:You ask for opinions, then completely disregard everything said and get defensive...

Well, dear Sir, I myself did not find Brogurt's responses defensive.

>implying I care
>implying this isnt a great way to get a point across
>implying you implied any of this

You ask for opinions, then completely disregard everything said and get defensive...

I'm sure a lot of people will be disappointed with the direction it's taken, although they probably won't be surprised. Still, well written.

I'm enjoying it! (Despite not knowing the source material - I'll check it out)

But you should definitely work on your papers as a priority, we can all wait here (and I assume your teachers can't )

Look forward to reading more

Few mistakes here and there, but overall seems like a fun enough little story, looking forward to the characters getting their powers now.

_________________________________ Links: The Collector Walls Call Me Lilly Treading Water Unfamiliar Gestures _________________________________ Walls Not sure where this came from, guess I was just thinking about my own walls, and this is what ended up coming out onto paper. It's short. ------------...

Another great story BlackRockHanako, like always. At first glance at the title, I was a little hesitant about the Fantasy tag, but wow, the fantasy elements were intergrated really well. And then theres Grammer Nazi MK, you haven't wont [won] anything yet And thats all I noticed. Thanks for the kin...

I am enjoying the hell out of this story so far. Keep it up! ZOMG Doomish commented on my story asdhasmhioacn!!1! *head explodes* I kid, I kid. Thanks for the support though Doom, I'm liking your Mutou story :D While I'm at it though, how do you link to different chapters? Click on the subject line...

Yay, another chapter, sweet! Suzu is so damn adorable! Right, now I have to let my perfectionist out.. so if she happens to fall asleep on you, it probably doesnt me[an] anything. Also, 'because I know shit all of where I'm going.' Am I reading this wrong, or did you mess it up? Think something's n...

Okay guys, Chapter 3 is here, and back to more subtle places than the second chapter. I'm actually very happy with how this turned out, especially after having bits of difficulty getting it off the ground (resulting in some other short pieces you may have seen around here.) But finally it's done, al...

BobBobberson wrote:This is going to be pure smut, isn't it?

Sure seems that way. I guess I'll check out the next part of the story, after that we'll see.

Oh, wow. Great as always, BlackRockHanako. I'd write some more, but it's 5 in the morning here, and insomnia combined with the mental image of a Knife/Paintbrush in Rin's eye have left me slightly speechless. Thanks for the kind comment! And I feel you on the whole exhaustion thing, I've come down ...