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by nemz
Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43294

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

This would make a lot more sense if she had been shipped out of the country, agreed. Thailand, maybe. And yes, If Hanako can have a panic attack over school group assignments then in this situation she should have been catatonic a long time ago. In all likelihood she ends up dumped in a trash pile a...
by nemz
Mon Jan 07, 2013 3:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43294

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

Maybe I'm just a cynical bastard, but I don't for one second believe Takai was really there to help her or that this rescue plan has even the vaguest hint of actually happening.
by nemz
Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 22669

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Mirage_GSM wrote:And if you consider Lilly is planning to go to Scotland, her bitch-rating increases tenfold.
YES.
by nemz
Sun Jan 06, 2013 4:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43294

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/5]

Nah, I wouldn't even call it a theory. Just a gut reaction that doesn't actually make any sense at all when I really ponder it, and in all likelihood is completely off-base. And now it's been built up so much for no reason that I'm definately not sharing it. :wink:
by nemz
Sun Jan 06, 2013 4:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 96992

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

I'm rather curious what people think Hisao should've done differently here, if anything. I have an idea, but like Rin, I sometimes prefer to keep my ideas to myself and let people interpret as they will. What Hisao does here I'm not entirely happy with. I thought he would have a strong, visceral re...
by nemz
Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43294

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/5]

Is anyone else a bit weirded out by the way Lilly acted at the mention of the bar and the idea that Hanako might be outside town, plus some of her mannerisms with Hisao? Maybe it's just me. It's not just you. Perhaps she's getting ready to leave for Scotland and is annoyed that Hisao is not turning...
by nemz
Sat Jan 05, 2013 5:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 96992

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Damn I hate it when Hisao shows how dense he can be. She was positively giddy and he pissed all over it.

You've definately captured the frustration of her route perfectly.
by nemz
Sat Jan 05, 2013 5:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 730952

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 1/05]

Tetsuo isn't the kind of guy I can bring myself to harbor any negative emotions for
He's an asshat. Not worthy of hate, but certainly a healthy dislike.
by nemz
Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43294

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]

Doomish mentioned in his OP that this story would be extremely OOC for Hanako, so I restricted my comments to the setting. He said OC (original charecters), not OOC. And yes, she could very easily get out of this if she tried. But she won't, at least not until there's enough pressure on her to forc...
by nemz
Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 739004

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/31)

Kenji IS a superhero. And now I will forever picture him as voiced by Charlton Heston. :lol:
by nemz
Tue Jan 01, 2013 5:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 43294

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]

This will either be horrible or incredible. Possibly both. The forum drama alone should be worth the effort.
by nemz
Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS-EVANGELION (2012)
Replies: 20
Views: 10303

Re: KS-EVANGELION (2012)

But it is related to this fic as a crossover, and since I know I'm not the only eva fan around these parts it might lead somewhere interesting. So yeah, expound on your issues with eva but do try to tie it back to the story offered here, perhaps by saying exactly why you feel the crossover isn't a g...
by nemz
Wed Dec 26, 2012 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS-EVANGELION (2012)
Replies: 20
Views: 10303

Re: KS-EVANGELION (2012)

I think the idea had promise, but relating the whole thing in past tense and with this terse summary style really limits it. But yes, Eva is good times, and I heartily approve of anyone who likes the original on-air version over the retcon. End of Evangelion is very good animation, but I don't care ...
by nemz
Mon Dec 24, 2012 5:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 96992

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

Well, that's an interesting dichotomy. Hisao and Rin are struggling to reconnect after a long separation, and now we see a couple whose decision not to separate temporarily is driving them apart. A lot of potential here.
by nemz
Thu Dec 20, 2012 10:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 515709

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 12/20)

Ahh, such a conundrum when two friends trying to ship each other for the same guy. That little hint at dinner had me waiting the whole rest of the chapter for the other shoe to drop. Good times.

And honestly, green? Green sucks. Misaha would look much better in white or light yellow.