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I had my own reply, but instead I'll just say +1 to Bagheera's comments.

Oh, and lolawesome? criticism is one thing but writting your own ending... not cool.

Cute scene.

It would have been interesting to have crossover moments like this between the various paths in the game so you can jump from route to route, but then I suppose that would compromise the integrity of the narrative.

It may sound goofy but... I recommend they just see Shrek. It's charming and light, yet touches upon issues both can relate too. Probably makes no sense for that to be in a theatre, so they can go out to dinner then curl up together in someone's room (or even a common room in the dorms) and watch it...

I mean, not everyone gives up on relationships right away after something like this happens. Case in point: my grandparents. I would strongly suspect the incident happened after your grandparents were married though, which entails religious, legal, financial, social and possibly childrearing bonds ...

Hypothetical situation here: suppose that things would have gone like this. Hanako and Tenshi fuck once. Then she's prepared to do it again, and decides against it because she feels guilty, then gets raped. To anyone who would care to respond, would this make it a bit more believable that Hisao wou...

Well, that's a worthy start. I'll be interested to see where you take this.

Because obviously what I was going for the entire time was an exploitation fic and there's no way I'd ever deviate from that Then what you were going for was an unbelievable, fairytale concept that shouldn't have seen the light of day in the first place. If you're going to do hard, gritty drama the...

Nope, in the end I just don't buy it. You tipped over the edge from drama into melodrama and gave us a rehash of Lilly's bullshit ending because you didn't have the balls to really kill her. Much better in my mind if in the end he really didn't know her well enough anymore to know where she'd go, an...

Intriguing... a 'magical pixie girl' with sharp teeth, like a living dream of carnivorous orchids and acid rainbows. I find myself highly doubtful that Hisao can handle such a dangerous creature, but will enjoy watching him die trying.

Could be taken as as a sign of severe mistrust... if he left a baggie of swimmers in her trash what's to stop her from fishing it out and knocking herself up without his consent? Sure it's crazy, but Kenji would applaud his efforts to deny the feminists more soldiers.

We're supposed to believe that Hisao is somehow inadequate for her, despite the fact that he's invested more in her than any other person on the planet? We're supposed to believe that she'd just cheat on him without discussing whatever it is that's bothering her? We're supposed to believe he feels ...

She just wanted to see if she could be entirely accepted by Hisao in part 3... and he ultimately couldn't trust her. She's in no position to be putting anyone through those sorts of unspoken tests. Besides, if he did completely trust her after this bullshit he'd be just showing once again what a sp...

And for the record, it was months, not years, and he had been pushing her to be more social, but not to that extent. If he told her to go outside and get the mail when she got hit by a truck or whatever your analogy is, I think he'd have plenty of reason to feel guilt. I'm sorry, but that's just st...

Rin, definately. Playing through her route was like looking at a catalog of my exes so I've more or less already dated her several times, just not all at once. She made WAY more sense to me than she did to Hisao even though I'm more of a 'thinker' than a 'feeler' too. the difference is I'm a thinker...

Decent start so far. I'll keep an eye on this one. btw: “But you, on the other hand! You’re perfect! I can see it in her eyes! She wants you to throw her on her bed and take her maidenhood her, you stud! You two are perfect for eachother” should probably be “But you on the other hand, you’re perfect...