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I must say this was a very good chapter. I'm guessing Lilly could actually feel Hisao's heart attempting to do back flips there? Oh, and I'm looking forward to the fight scene, at least, as long as it is for a good reason (preferably in defense of someone).

For some reason I feel that this doesn't even have to be the end. I mean, they're both pretty sure they love the other, with a block or two in the way. I figure after this they both wallow in self-pity for a bit until Miki or someone snaps them out of it.

How very interesting. I hope there's more to come.

This wasn't your best chapter IMO. Too over the top. It seems you sacrificed believably for silliness.

Huh, who would have thought that the death of, well, Death, could be sad.

You doubled up. Besides that, another good chapter. I do have to wonder, with his condition (blind left eye, right?), how long it will be before something quite literally hits him out of left field. Could make for a small bit of humor in the right context.

With the emphasis you are putting on Iwanako's scars, I get the felling that somehow Hannako is, in fact, the freed/escaped Iwanako.

I turn my head to the side and close my eyes as I embrace for impact. A loud slapping sound fills the air, but to my own surprise it wasn’t from her face hitting my cheek. I open my eyes and Shizune is looking at me with her head cocked to the side in confusion. She then points to my side and I see...

I don't see why the others are complaining, I liked it. I haven't seen a post-Kenji reaction short before. Interesting to see how big of an impact (no pun intended) he made even after just a week.

Heh, I actually heard the theme music start at the end there...

To be honest, I actually prefer Matt Smith, but this is sure to be good regardless. Also, here's hoping Saki becomes the next companion!

I just wonder if he is somehow going to include Hisao and Hanako in his efforts to help his wife.

Watching with great interest.

I would encourage you to continue this. Perhaps when Lilly or Hanako wonder where Hisiao is disappearing to on the weekends?

I like it. Nice to see a different art style. (and well drawn at that). I would encourage you to do more.

*shrug* As long as the good authors don't leave, I'll stick around for the fanfic.