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- Thu Mar 08, 2012 10:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-12 Complete
Well, if it's of no consequence to you guys, I guess that means that Naomi gets to keep her name. I wasn't looking forward to going back to edit all the previous parts, so thanks for sparing me that. Although... there's a fair few mistakes in them I should fix. *sigh* A man's work is never done. Als...
- Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-12 Complete
Well... this is awkward. I'm rereading Lilly's route at the moment, and I've come to a really really really annoying realisation. As it turns out, a name I thought was totally original and quite creative is in fact an existing character within Katawa Shoujo, kana for kana. The name I refer to is Nao...
- Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Katawa Yankee (Updated 5/7/12)
- Replies: 31
- Views: 12288
Re: Whaddya Mean 'Cripple'?
The first paragraph inexplicably chops and changes from present to past tense and back again. May wanna look into fixing that. Also, your first sentence does this in itself, pick one perspective per sentence in future. Never really saw Hisao as a fighter, but I'm interested in seeing how you will go...
- Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-8 Complete
Day Twelve The speakers of the PA system sound the carillons signalling the end of the school day. Seto, Naomi and I are ready in advance; our materials are already stowed and our chairs are positioned to be ditched at the first ring of the bell. We quickly abandon our desks and slip though our les...
- Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-8 Complete
Holy crap guys this is really scary. Note that on the 16th I mentioned I had lost my data. This included the original version of Day 4, in which I placed a fairly detailed description of the character Naomi. Some key points to note - she has long red hair, she is tall, and long legged, and has quite...
- Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:51 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Relationship Poll
- Replies: 120
- Views: 40095
Re: Relationship Poll
I'm 18 and never been in a relationship. For most of my life girls never had any appeal to me. Then when they did (about 3-4 years ago) I didn't feel comfortable participating with my friends in discussions on the matter. Looking back I think it was because I was afraid that what I thought was diffe...
- Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:58 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4989
- Views: 6622463
Re: Ask!
Having gone beyond the original art and created a slew of side characters to feature in the finished product, you often state that the reason other routes don't exist is to stay true to RAITA's drawing. Having said that, if that decision was not made, which original character (male or female) would...
- Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-6 Complete
Day Eight The day is here - either we convince Sakura-Sensei to sign for our club, and we get to play this afternoon, or we don't and never play together again. Well, never in the music room at least, but I don't think the guys would take too kindly to moving everything elsewhere, and I don't think...
- Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:07 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-6 Complete
Indeed you are correct. Would you like me to make that more clear? I'm gonna have to edit that post at some point anyway, so I'd be happy to do so. In any case, how are the new parts? The wording deviated a bit from what I had before my computer died, and I think I've left something out (but I can't...
- Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:58 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4989
- Views: 6622463
Re: Ask!
Having gone beyond the original art and created a slew of side characters to feature in the finished product, you often state that the reason other routes don't exist is to stay true to RAITA's drawing. Having said that, if that decision was not made, which original character (male or female) would ...
- Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-4 Complete
Day Six "Christ, man, again with the cafeteria food?" "What, have you got a problem with that?" "Well, yeah. The cafeteria sucks ass, man." I shrug away Seto's disdain and tuck into my ass-sucking cafeteria food regardless. I honestly can't disagree with him. The cafet...
- Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-2 Complete
Day Four Monday is rife with anxious antsiness. It seems to take forever and a day for each tick of the clock; very different to yesterday. I look back over the previous day's transpirings. Seto showing me to the music room and giving me a rundown of all the equipment they had in storage, including...
- Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: My Name is Not Steve
- Replies: 12
- Views: 12200
Re: My Name is Not Steve
Righto so the topic on GFAQs 500'd so we have to wait for GrrMan to make the new one before we can continue. I've updated to the most recent post added. Here are the choices from the last post: ---------------------------------------------------- But that can wait. You are standing in front of the d...
- Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-2 Complete
I'm sorry about the delay. Whilst typing up the next two parts of the story my computer contracted some sort of virus and spontaneously combusted (no not really, but case in point it is currently unusable). As a result I have bought a new machine, but my work is stuck on the hard drive of the old in...
- Mon Feb 13, 2012 12:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53046
Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-2 Complete
I intend to go into Naomi's description a lot more in the next part, as the characters gather for Seto's band meeting. As for Seto's name, I only have it on the word of Yu-Gi-Oh that it is a given name and the word of my Japanese-Australian friend Jack that to name one Seto would be like naming a ki...