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Thanks very much for the support guys! It really means a lot to me. I'm gonna start writing the next part in between classes at Uni, so hopefully I'll get it done early this time and I'll be able to write another. I've also been thinking about doing some art for my story too, but I don't think it'll...

Lothbrok wrote:Your stories make my morning transits so much shorter thank you ;D

Hahaha I'm glad to hear it! I'm probably gonna get swamped with work again this week at Uni so I might only get one more page done this weekend, but I'll try and get two done for you, alright? Thanks for reading!

Day Thirty Two The aftermath of the festival hangs over us like the dense fog one finds near the coasts in the morning. The general unresponsiveness of all the students makes for a very difficult teaching experience, and as such all of my teachers today have been very lax. Of course, it has nothing...

Well well well, you've improved. And quite a lot too. I'm liking where this is going. It's some kind of alternative reality in which Hisao is a hot headed jerk who may or may not think with his penis. It certainly makes for fresh reading. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Gah! You're evil! Poor Lilly... what have you done?!

Another well written chapter. You're churning these pages out pretty quickly; it makes me wonder - have you got a plan for this, or are you just making it up as you go along?

I wasn't going to read this, but when I saw the reactions I couldn't help but do so. I now regret it. What the actual fuck did I just read? This is worse than that "I wrote his in ten minutes" guy. because it actually seems like you have put effort into this monstrosity. I must therefore c...

^ Indeed sir. Fluff, you seem to have a tendency to misspell Hisao as Hisoa. And in your most recent post you mistyped an italics tag. Other than that, I'm liking what I'm reading so far. Love seeing all the old characters so many years on, Nurse and Kenji and such. I also liked the reference to Shi...

Excellent idea sir, and for the most part very well written. There are a number of simple spelling errors however; 'hr' appears a few times, and 'Muto' and 'Visio' are meant to be 'Mutou' and 'Hisao'. There's one or two more but I think with a quick proofread you could pick these up with no trouble....

Gah, that was fast! Sad to realise though that I've reached the 'end' yet again. Back to waiting mode now, although I expect I'll be waiting a little longer this time. In the mean time; great scenes. I was thinking that Rika was going to talk about the incident with Mr. X, then BAM heart attack. Nic...

I would die for you... That's what sums up this story for me. Such a powerful statement. I greatly admire what you've written here, although I'm not a fan of having speech and prose in the same paragraph. If you take a look at my writing you'll notice I avoid this as much as possible, for that reas...

What? I've reached the end of the topic? No, this isn't fair! I want to read more Rika story! Grr, if only I hadn't started reading tonight, then I wouldn't be disappointed like this. I eagerly await the next parts of your story, man. Keep up the good work.

"Hee-sao" is indeed correct. There was a pastebin thing that linked to all the names on like a vocaliser thing, but I don't have it on me at the moment and I can't be bothered running to my GFAQs sticky.

Day Thirty One I check the time being displayed on the alarm clock that came with my room. It's only about 10:30. I didn't realise the festival was such a big event as to attract so many people this early. A survey of the crowd outside shows that the great majority of the festival-goers are middle-...

I don't usually swear, but what the actual fuck did I just read?

Day Thirty "Goddamn that girl, where is she? Late to the last rehearsal... disgraceful." As much as I usually disagree with Daisuke, I think I have to side with him this one time. He is right, today is our last rehearsal before the festival, and it is - rightly so - the most important. So...