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by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Mar 24, 2012 1:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 369686

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012

Mahorfeus wrote:You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.
Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 53032

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 49 Now Up 21/3/12

Day Unknown Seto counts in the next song with his drum sticks. One, two, one-two-three-four. On my cue I begin strumming my guitar in time to the beat. E3 power chord slide into E1 power chord; A3 power chord one bar, D3 power chord one bar, E3 power chord one bar... to anyone not well versed in mu...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 369686

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012

Great new scenes you've got here, Rikabro. You actually had me going backwards through the pages to find out what words Hisao meant when referring to those that could have been Rika's last. "I'm so sorry", as it turns out . I'm also very impressed by your Rin. Absolutely nailed it, I'm sur...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Piece Of My Heart For You (Hisao X Hanako)
Replies: 15
Views: 8592

Re: A Piece Of My Heart For You (Hisao X Hanako)

"Umm...l-let's see...there's Mindless Self Indulgence, Rammstein, Linkin Park, Loudness, Disturbed, Earthshaker, t.A.T.u., Weid Al Yankovic, Nirvana ..." I very much appreciate Hanako's taste. Hisao, however... "...I...I...I see...those are all...uh, very interesting choices..."...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:16 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63753

Re: Design your character!

It doesn't have to be made into a 'real thing' by the devs. By all means write a fanfic about your characters. God knows I did. Well, sort of, the current iteration of my character is quite different. Also, I'm sure if you asked, others would also be happy for you to write fics about their character...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:07 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which of the girls would you date in real life?
Replies: 170
Views: 58141

Re: Which of the girls would you date in real life?

Hanako. In all seriousness, still Hanako. She's quiet, reserved, introverted... much like myself. Also she likes books, chess and computers. So moe.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cola and Cigarettes (Hisao Fic)
Replies: 15
Views: 8451

Re: Cola and Cigarettes (Hisao Fic)

After that Hanako story I was rather wary of going into this topic. Nevertheless, that asshole curiosity dragged me in here, and how very surprised I was. This is brilliant. You've told an entire lifetime of story (pun totally intended) in a little over four hundred words. I do not believe I will ev...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: an idea need help
Replies: 5
Views: 2530

Re: an idea need help

I can tell you from experience that working with original characters is incredibly difficult. Not only do you have to create this person from the ground up (that is, name, appearance, personality, back story, etc), but you also have to make them unique and distinct from the existing characters. So t...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 80592

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Complete)

I'm not sure what I think about this ending. To me, it appears your story 'jumped the shark' in closing with this chapter. It appears like some fourteen year old fangirl took your story and added a slashfic ending to it. Please understand that I mean no disrespect in saying this. I cannot fault your...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 53032

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 49 Now Up 21/3/12

Thanks for the input. Insightful as always, Mirage. I'll make the edits now.
Cheers, BlackWaltz.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Mar 21, 2012 5:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 53032

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 32 Now Up

Day Forty Nine I can feel the vibrations coming from the movement of the wheels as the minibus whizzes down the road. Either side of me are Naomi and Seto, and together we're taking up the whole back seat. Between Naomi and I lie our clasped hands, and it's somewhat noticable that the distance betw...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Tue Mar 20, 2012 7:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 80592

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story

Someone asked for a pic of Akira's cleavage. I couldn't help but oblige. Here's my lame ass art of Akira (attachment).

I think I can see where the story is going. I'm not entirely sure if I want to be proven wrong. So as usual, I must wait for the next installment. Happy writing!
Cheers, BlackWaltz.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Tue Mar 20, 2012 7:14 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 6622222

Re: Ask!

Hey again devs, I was wondering to what extent you guys engage in the fan culture of the KS community; that is, do you read much in the way of fan fiction, or view much in the way of fan art? What do you think of what you have seen, if any? Have you guys actually read much of the finished project? A...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Yankee (Updated 5/7/12)
Replies: 31
Views: 12288

Re: Chapter 4

MockTugBoat wrote:“That’s weird, I could of sworn that…”
That's about the only thing I can criticise here. It's a common mistake, sadly; it should read "could have". Other than that, nice work. I'm looking forward to Encounter: Kenji, very much so indeed.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Run
Replies: 14
Views: 7406

Re: Run

This was a really cool story. It kind of reminded me of The Bourne books mixed with a little bit of some anime I watched once with this pink haired girl and lots of blood. I wish there was more!