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- Sun Apr 01, 2012 5:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
- Replies: 95
- Views: 33353
Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Chapter Three - Gauze and Bandages "Tell me you love me again." Kiyoko's voice was mystified as she took the first step toward the back door. "Please." ... "I would give up winning the lottery for you; Hell, I'd give an arm and a leg for you. I'd give you anything if it'd m...
- Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53031
Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 62 now up: 29/3/12
day sixty nine i woke up lol and realised it was sunday and i needed to do something so i got out of bed and went over to naomis room and knocked on the door "hay naomi wake up i have a surprise for you" i said "what katsuro its ealry in the morning i was sleeping i pointed down to t...
- Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 369686
Re: Rika Story - updated 3/29/2012
Lol not quoting two scenes. Rikabro, another great post. I like the thing you got the Nurse to say; it hearkens back to the inference that Nurse got Emi to keep an eye on Hisao at the track, or the lack thereof. It's also nice to see a different dynamic in the Hisao/Mutou relationship too; I don't ...
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 8:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53031
Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 62 now up: 29/3/12
Oh, I understand. Thanks for clarifying, Mirage, I'll get right on those edits.
Cheers, BlackWaltz.
Cheers, BlackWaltz.
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 7:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53031
Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 62 now up: 29/3/12
"You're free to go, though I would advise avoiding any sort of head trauma for a few days." I'd advise him to avoid head trauma in general. ;-) How come they are all in the music room half an hour after class started? It sounds a bit strange that he racounts the events of the burglary usi...
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 7:06 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4989
- Views: 6622212
Re: Ask!
True enough, but at least you've got a better chance of protection than you did if you had nothing... Also most of them have expiry dates written on them to prevent such degradation (and lawsuits, I imagine). Also to the Melbourne guy, this is talking a good 14 years ago. That was when AIDS was sti...
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
- Replies: 95
- Views: 33353
Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Indeed, pencils do contain graphite, contrary to the title 'lead' given to it. Perhaps once upon a time the lead of a pencil was actually lead, but that time is long gone. Anyway, I'm liking this story. It's very interesting to read a story from Mutou's perspective, that's for sure. I like the chara...
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cola and Cigarettes (Hisao Fic)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8451
Re: Cola and Cigarettes (Hisao Fic)
Of course you would have a picture of Kenji as your avatar when you say that.Roamin12 wrote:Or the miracle of modern science, but aliens seem more likely.CommnderShepard wrote:Roamin12 wrote:I liked it, though he did seem to to live a really long time...suspiciously long...
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:01 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4989
- Views: 6622212
Re: Ask!
Maybe things are different up Sydney way, but at the high school I went to not once did we ever have 'access' to condoms or any of those vending machine things; I haven't seen any so far at Uni either. I've only ever seen one of those in the toilet in Southern Cross Station. Having now mentioned it....
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 2:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53031
Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - ?? now up: 24/3/12
Day Sixty Two The doctor withdraws his stethoscope and replaces it around his neck. "Well, that's everything. Apart from a few cuts and bruises, you have a clean bill of health. You're free to go, though I would advise avoiding any sort of head trauma for a few days." "Thank you, Doc...
- Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Of Jigoro and Hisao
- Replies: 16
- Views: 8776
Re: Of Jigoro and Hisao
Great story. First time I've read a fic with Jigoro in it, and it's a very different side of Jigoro that I see. All the while staying in character. Excellent work, sir. I must note however there's several spelling and grammar mistakes in there, might want to give it a bit of a once over and fix that...
- Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
- Replies: 96
- Views: 53031
Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - ?? now up: 24/3/12
I think you get far too few compliments. cameo appearance for Hisao? Unless I'm reading that wrongly, that is in itself a compliment, am I right? Thank you very much. As for that other thing... we'll see. I started with the intent of cameoing everyone, but as the chapters have worn on that's become...
- Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:17 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4989
- Views: 6622212
Re: Ask!
Thought of another few questions guys. When writing the routes, did you have a main story structure in mind and then add in choices later on, or did you write the routes with the choices in mind? I figure Act 1 can be excepted from this question. Running on from that, I can only assume that it was e...
- Sat Mar 24, 2012 9:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 369686
Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens. Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive. Yeah, if you put the money in the Cash Deposit drive it should take. While on the subject does anyone know how to dislodge a credit ...
- Sat Mar 24, 2012 9:27 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What Genre/Kind of music do the Girls listen to?
- Replies: 33
- Views: 11786
Re: What Genre/Kind of music do the Girls listen to?
Emi - Something classic rock-esque. Queen, The Who, Creedence Clearwater Revival. Pretty similar to the lighter side of my taste. Rin - Something from the sixties or seventies, that whole Psychedelic Rock thing. Not old enough or into it enough to name a band. Lilly - Something with a lot of piano a...