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A few issues: - It's nice you want to give the readers clues as to what is going to happen, but keep in mind you're writing this story from Natsumi's perspective, so every information you give the reader should be available to Natsumi as well. For example you're dropping hints left and right that Ha...

Congrats!
Trip across the Atlantic would be a bit difficult though.
Any of the devs going to be there?

Don't read this spioler until the end. I wanted to make the baby's middle name that of Hanako's father but I don't know it. Anyone have the answer to that? So why didn't you put it at the end of the post? Oh, and sorry, her fathers name is not disclosed in the game. Would you really give a baby gir...

Oops, I almost missed this one.
A bit predictable, but a very enjoyable read nonetheless.

Rin wrote:"Remember how I can only have four thoughts at one time? ...Since we met, at least one has been you."

Very sweet. My favourite line.

Interesting...
I have something similar in the works - minus the yaoi of course.

Thank you for stopping where you did
Also, I think you're missing a "not" here:

But as unaware as I was of them, they, too, did know know of my existence.

Since when has bust size been an indicator of lolliness? OK, I suppose it is an indicator , but only because most lollis are prepubescent. There are grown women with small bust sizes, and they are not considered lollis. Emi is supposed to be 18 years old and now she looks the part. (The old Emi alwa...

I hope it isn't steroids - Emi isn't the type for such things...
@ Naba: I don't think you need to worry about that.

When I first saw the new Emi sprites in the Blog, I wasn't very happy about them, but now that I have replayed the game with the new sprites, and seen old and new next to each other, I vastly prefer the new sprites.
That KS will be a VN without any obvious Lolli-Character is an added bonus.

Nice story so far.
Hope to see some more interaction (i.e. any at all) with the Ouran main cast in the future.

BTW, I have a feeling as to the identity of Kanna's sister. If I'm right, this is going to be interesting...

Now someone needs to dub it - it's very confusing if the Sub and the Dub say completely different things. Had to mute to watch.
Very funny anyway.
There's another version out there where Hitler complains about the vuvuzelas at the soccer worldcup:

Just pointed a friend to KS. She downloaded the file (DDL/Windows) without problems but has an error on installing: installer intergrity check hes failed. common causes include incomplete download and damaged media. contact the installer's autor to obtain a new copy. I cannot reproduce the problem o...

This thread is kind of old, but since you still seem to check the forums from time to time, I'll try for some constructive criticizm - as opposed to the "Give up and get out" kind. Others mentioned your spelling and grammar. Don't rely on word - get a proofreader. Apart from that, my main ...

Bonus points if you can name the movie ;-) Like I said, I plan to continue the scenario - eventually - but not from Rin's PoV. If everything goes as I envision it, I'm going to be switching perspectives a lot, so Rin might get a scene or two as well. Anyway, for the reasons stated above, it's not go...

OK, this is my first KS fanfic - and incidentally the first fanfic I've written in about five years. I'm not going to comment at this point, so please enjoy ;-) Thanks to Kosherbacon for pre- and proofreading. -------------------- Emi bursts onto the roof grinning widely, all but dragging Hisao behi...