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This beta is ready!

…assuming it’s done before the night of the 29th. Then I’m going out of town and won’t have my laptop with me.

Well, depending on how long you take, the next chapter might be up before you're done. It's about halfway through editing now, so that'll probably be late tomorrow or Sunday. Very likely. I’m rereading it on my iPad, and still haven’t finished Chapter 7. I stopped until I finally put up my note abo...

Since the group had split up, Refia's making sure that Hanako is looking after Refia, and she hasn't wandered off on her own. Miya's just stating that Hanako is still looking after Refia, which she's been doing more or less since they got off the jeepney. Yes, but if don’t understand the use of the...

Your numbering is off. You have two Chapter Sixes, so the latest is actually Chapter Eight.

Hoitash wrote:“Mom has Refia, right?” Satomi asked while we walked.

Miya nodded, “Yet and still.”

I am not familiar with this. What is meant here? Context tells me what it’s supposed to mean, but I don’t understand it.

Well, you did it. You made me start to reread the whole thing.

So in Chapter 7:

dewelar wrote:Hisao looks over at me, but his expression is hard to read. I stand up and face him, my hand instinctively reaching to my hair, making it's in place.

Perhaps, "making sure it’s in place"?

brythain wrote: 1989-03-13 Tezuka, Rin (fate unknown)

Daniel Simpson Day Whereabouts unknown

First thing I thought of when I saw that.

dewelar wrote:They do.

Ah yes. I had forgotten about author fiat.

And now you’re going to make me want to reread the whole thing.

I think Shizune helping LIlly will multiply her chances of getting Hisao back by two and a third. “Twice nothing is still nothing.” Of course, unless Shizune and Lilly both know deaf-blind speech (which was not established in the VN, despite its popularity in fan fiction), they will have to go thro...

…Sure. Good luck. Are you saying that Shizune is a Jägermonster? No, just that the odds of Hisao getting Hanako and Emi are probably greater than Shizune getting Hisao. Of course, if the ‘Come on Shizune!’ comment was merely about her helping Lilly getting Hisao back, the odds are much better. Anyt...

brythain wrote:Come on Shizune!

…Sure. Good luck.

Hoitash wrote:One of the things he said, which never really made sent to me until I went to Yamaku

You have too many verbs and not enough nouns in this part.

Saturday . One last day of school before Sunday. I dig into the food in front of me, and only just manage to finish everything before the bell rings and we all have to get up and go back to class . Saturday classes are morning only. I have to reread all the previous parts to make an effective comme...

Shouldn’t Hisao be a part of the crew?

You know, I'm thinking of revising my statement about BEFFs. There is exactly one bad ending with the potential to be successfully BEFFed, and that bad ending is The Deep End. Hmm, never thought of my last short writing as the beginning of a BEFF. I just wrote it to give Hisao a new start with a wh...

And I have a new favorite chapter. It didn’t seem unusual to me that Emi began her epiphany because of talking to Hanako. When every conversation Emi has with every person has the subject of “Why aren’t you pursuing Hisao like you had been?” hiding somewhere in it, eventually a breaking point is rea...