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- Tue Apr 30, 2024 4:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
- Replies: 96
- Views: 46674
Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Alright, to open up I've gotta be honest. I started reading this for wholly selfish reasons. (spoilers for the vague idea of a project I plan on working on some time in the future) I am interested in writing a route following a girl that's into archery as well, and wanted to make sure my character w...
- Sun Apr 21, 2024 12:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
- Replies: 37
- Views: 42719
Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
Its nice to see Taro starting to feel comfortable enough to open up to Saki, as scary as it is. Lots of fun interactions there.
Also, Rika pls stop giving me anxiety.
[edit] Also, also, congrats on 1k posts on the forums Sharp-O! Always excited to see what your stories have in store for us!
- Thu Apr 11, 2024 6:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Wordplay - (Akio x Hisao one-shot/pilot)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 882
Re: Wordplay - (Akio x Hisao one-shot/pilot)
I really enjoyed this one. Hanako and Akio's friendship is fun and endearing, and the banter between them is fun so I'm always happy to see more of it (I know I need to read Monomyth and I do plan to eventually). I like the alternate take on the Deep End and the idea that there's a group (or probabl...
- Wed Mar 20, 2024 2:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 22930
Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
[snip] Looking forward to your next update, and I'll adjust accordingly. I would operate under the assumption that the image in not 100% representative of the actual story. It's meant to be a visual, done by an artist not familiar with the material. With that said, if you do use the image as refere...
- Mon Mar 18, 2024 3:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 22930
Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Before I got to responding to the comments, I wanted to give an update on how the Scenes will look in the future. After some deliberating and bits of feedback I think it's in the best interest of everyone here that going forward I try to avoid larger posts such as Scene 4. As much as I enjoy larger ...
- Sun Mar 10, 2024 3:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 22930
Scene 4: One Step Forward Part 3
Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 (This post) ________________________________ Sleeping was evidently a futile effort last night. No matter what I did there was always something that ended up bothering me and it turned into a constant battle with myself. I hate that Nurse and Emi are right about the importance ...
- Sun Mar 10, 2024 3:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 22930
Scene 4: One Step Forward Part 2
Part 1 Part 2 (this post) Part 3 ________________________________ Some time later, my phone buzzes twice - a text. I flip it open, surprised to see the time. I peek out the window to double-check and sure enough, I’ve been studying for three hours. Usually, it’s hard for me to stay focused that lon...
- Sun Mar 10, 2024 3:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 22930
Scene 4: One Step Forward
Part 1 (this post) Part 2 Part 3 ________________________________ Scene 4: One Step Forward There used to be a time where I felt that morning was the worst part of the day. Then came running. With or without Emi, it really changed my opinion on the start of the day. Unfortunately, now that neither ...
- Mon Mar 04, 2024 8:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Intentions
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3215
Re: Intentions
So far so good. I've been following along and This most recent chapter's the one that really got me invested. Probably because it hurt the most so far, 'least for me. As a fan of dark stories, I'm interested to see where this goes. I suspect the future chapters will continue to bounce to different p...
- Thu Feb 22, 2024 8:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 189098
Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Four: Still Alive [22/2/24]
Nice to get a moment of calm after all the drama and tension that's been hanging over the bunch recently. The in-school reunion was cute across the board, though I feel bad for Hanako. Hopefully whatever Hisao was talking to her about wasn't important .
- Thu Jan 25, 2024 4:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 38709
Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Sometimes all we need in life is to find someone walking down the same path as us at the same time, and to have them look in our direction. To see us, the same way we see them. I believe that's what's happening here for Ritsu and Hisao. They're both at a point in their lives where they've seemingly ...
- Mon Jan 01, 2024 7:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
- Replies: 52
- Views: 63107
Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
Glad to see Hisao and Akira's support system growing and working out well, god knows they'll need it to get through whatever's coming their way. Interested in seeing how this Hokkaido trip goes and if it draws on any parallels to Hisao's last. Great chapter and enjoyable read! Excited to see its con...
- Sat Dec 30, 2023 11:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shutter Steps (SS23 for StealthyWolf)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 14458
Re: Shutter Steps (SS23 for StealthyWolf)
Sits back in awe, probably a little star-struck. I... don't really know how to start this. Actually, that's a lie. I do. That was god damn beautiful, Feurox! I'd say you'd out-done yourself once again if it wasn't so repetitive. I couldn't ask for a better story and I'm glad that I played some part...
- Sat Dec 30, 2023 3:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
- Replies: 107
- Views: 99797
Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 30th of December, 2023
First of all, this was definitely an interesting take on Hanako and Hisao's development and friendship. Though I'm slightly confused by the wording in the very start... The idea seemed almost appealing when I first caught sight of my ex-girlfriend ten minutes ago but when I realised this was my clas...
- Sat Dec 30, 2023 2:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 225935
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Ecstasy in Motion" 29/12/23
Really enjoyed this short! I think the interpretation that this is a bittersweet story erring on the side of sadness is valid, but that's not how I interpret it. Sure, there's a bit of mourning to be had with the loss of what could have been - the good times that slipped through their fingers - but ...