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I feel like I’m getting emotional whiplash from bouncing between one extreme to the other the other. Emotional whiplash indeed... Unfortunately the meeting with Yoko didn't go too well. I kinda of relate to how this went down since it's sort of been a fear of mine on some level. I have a tendency t...

Well this was certainly a fun one. I really like the grittier take on the "goings-ons" surrounding Yamaku and the environment. Yamaku is certainly painted as a "space space" of sorts in many stories and while it's not a bad thing necessarily, it is interesting to think about. if ...

Hey! Great story, and very evocative emotional tension between Iwanako and Mai. I like the idea that Hisao has someone from his past moving with him to Yamaku, (which i assume is the foreshadow here) and I think the reasoning of Mai's fear is well done. [/size] That's the idea! It's not like I want...

Bundle of Mai “How’s he doing?” Ten minutes. It took me ten god damn minutes to say something to my best friend. On top of that, she came here, sat down, said hello, I wasted ten minutes not saying anything, and that’s the first thing I come up with? Pathetic. Cold gusts of wind rattle the barren t...

Well, that was depressing. And that’s coming from me. *Bows* Really good work though, oddly sympathetic. Thanks! That was the goal with this one, verbatim. I’m always a bit hesitant to write Kenji, because I think he’s not as disconnected from reality as most tend to write him - that said, this lev...

This was cute. I was wondering what went down with Fuuka while Hisao and Rika were gone... A meeting with Akio was not exactly what I was expecting, nor was the way the meeting went. I love the world-building and expansion, and seeing as you've made a thread and set it up to have multiple stories, I...

I think Lap worded it best there, because damn, my heart hurts. I'm always amazed with how well you weave such entrancing prose into the narrative without it feeling pretentious. Reminds me of how I felt when I read A Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu Route - that being I was able to get lost in the headspace and ...

Long overdue comment, but better late than never. Hmm, been a bit since I did one of theses so forgive me while I get back into form. First and foremost, just like many others here I absolutely adore this Rika. She's fun, cute, refreshing, and a downright adorable person to experience this story thr...

This was a really fun piece. I may not have read the Mythology yet, but this certainly helps bump it up in my list of things to read. I always found it funny that usually I enjoyed a cocky, over-prepared, winning before the "game" even starts character and yet was left feeling "meh&qu...

*slow claps* That was... well I could come up with a series of different words that all don't quite fit. I'm even tempted to list them all out, but the point is that I really enjoyed this story. Perhaps it's a Suzu thing because that's 2/2 Suzu's that have completely engrossed me despite vastly diff...

Delta Echo November India Alpha Lima Killer. First, there’s a sharp, unforgiving voice coming from everywhere. Then a silence so loud I lose my balance. What was I doing? I look down at my hand to see a near empty bottle of Single Malt. Right. Mom sent me this because she couldn’t make it to the fe...

Just a hub for anything that's not a long-form fic of its own. That or contests, secret santa submissions, etc. or possibly teasers/tests for what might one day become a longer fic of its own, depending on how much I want to explore the project. These will be of varying quality as different levels o...

---------------- The walk to the park is mostly quiet. I think the three of us needed time to recover from our reunion, so we stick to safe and less exhausting topics such as the odd change in scenery that had happened the last few months: some stores had opened and others had closed, the crooked be...

Sorry for the long break, there's a lot to work on in these scenes and I don't want to rush it. As is usual there will be 2 back to back posts. Probably should just expect that for the time being. As always, huge thanks to Stiles for the immense amount of time you've put into this project alongside ...

Hey there! Earlier I've promised to take a look at your story. But I was too busy completing the remainder of my work (finally done, by the way). Finally have a chance to sit down and enjoy the read. Congratulations on finishing! I still have yours on my read-list, though I've slowed down the amoun...