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- Mon Mar 04, 2024 8:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Intentions
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3682
Re: Intentions
So far so good. I've been following along and This most recent chapter's the one that really got me invested. Probably because it hurt the most so far, 'least for me. As a fan of dark stories, I'm interested to see where this goes. I suspect the future chapters will continue to bounce to different p...
- Thu Feb 22, 2024 8:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Six: Invincibility [18/5/24]
- Replies: 318
- Views: 219989
Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Four: Still Alive [22/2/24]
Nice to get a moment of calm after all the drama and tension that's been hanging over the bunch recently. The in-school reunion was cute across the board, though I feel bad for Hanako. Hopefully whatever Hisao was talking to her about wasn't important .
- Thu Jan 25, 2024 4:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 44378
Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Sometimes all we need in life is to find someone walking down the same path as us at the same time, and to have them look in our direction. To see us, the same way we see them. I believe that's what's happening here for Ritsu and Hisao. They're both at a point in their lives where they've seemingly ...
- Mon Jan 01, 2024 7:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
- Replies: 52
- Views: 66493
Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
Glad to see Hisao and Akira's support system growing and working out well, god knows they'll need it to get through whatever's coming their way. Interested in seeing how this Hokkaido trip goes and if it draws on any parallels to Hisao's last. Great chapter and enjoyable read! Excited to see its con...
- Sat Dec 30, 2023 11:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shutter Steps (SS23 for StealthyWolf)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 15537
Re: Shutter Steps (SS23 for StealthyWolf)
Sits back in awe, probably a little star-struck. I... don't really know how to start this. Actually, that's a lie. I do. That was god damn beautiful, Feurox! I'd say you'd out-done yourself once again if it wasn't so repetitive. I couldn't ask for a better story and I'm glad that I played some part...
- Sat Dec 30, 2023 3:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
- Replies: 107
- Views: 104055
Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 30th of December, 2023
First of all, this was definitely an interesting take on Hanako and Hisao's development and friendship. Though I'm slightly confused by the wording in the very start... The idea seemed almost appealing when I first caught sight of my ex-girlfriend ten minutes ago but when I realised this was my clas...
- Sat Dec 30, 2023 2:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 255663
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Ecstasy in Motion" 29/12/23
Really enjoyed this short! I think the interpretation that this is a bittersweet story erring on the side of sadness is valid, but that's not how I interpret it. Sure, there's a bit of mourning to be had with the loss of what could have been - the good times that slipped through their fingers - but ...
- Wed Dec 13, 2023 10:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 255663
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Tender & Wild" (SS23) 12/12/23
That was a fantastic story and SS kick-off Sharp-O. Thought I'd come in and leave that more "eloquently" worded response I mentioned not being able to give before ;). First and foremost I want to reiterate that I love the personalities and banter in all your works I've read so far and this...
- Sun Dec 10, 2023 12:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Stealthy's Shorts [Newest Addition: May 14th, 2024. - "Haruhiko Suzumiya and the Great Ibarazaki Christmas Mystery!"]
- Replies: 19
- Views: 16191
Dash and Dine
Dash and Dine “Hey! What’s with the outfit? Preeeetty sure you told me you couldn’t run today.” Emi raises an eyebrow at Hisao as he steps onto the bleachers. She hadn’t even heard him approach until now. How long had he been standing in the grass in silence? Emi was also certain Hisao told her to ...
- Sat Dec 02, 2023 11:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 34618
Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]
Interesting. Following :) Glad to have you on board! Hope you'll enjoy what's coming. Not another massive comment from me, don't worry! Long comments only slightly worry me. I love getting feedback, helps me further develop my thoughts and the story. ...you're clearly more confident in your style. ...
- Fri Nov 24, 2023 11:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Consequences of Comfort
- Replies: 11
- Views: 26569
Re: Consequences of Comfort
You've done it again Lap! Amazing story all around with some really interesting ideas and twists put into it. First thing I want to get out of the way, and not spend too much time on, is in relation to Hisao. I agree that this was certainly not his story, nor would it have been a good idea to spend ...
- Tue Nov 14, 2023 11:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Counter Breaker [31/5/24]
- Replies: 43
- Views: 60729
Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Degrees of Freedom [14/11/23]
Hoh boy, The fallout from those messages is definitely gonna make its rounds. There's no going back now Saki, you're all in now. Redemption arc is in full swing now. I also like how strong of a pull Rika/Hisao have amongst the other in her friend group with pretty much everyone (besides Fuuka) insta...
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 11:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1207
- Views: 1177732
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)
Glad to see you're doing well Euro, and huge congrats on the engagement! This was meant to be a shorter comment to be a sort of hold-over for my eventual full re-read and comment then, but oh well. I guess this'll make that "full" comment just a tad shorter. Probably. There's... a lot of w...
- Thu Nov 02, 2023 11:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Counter Breaker [31/5/24]
- Replies: 43
- Views: 60729
Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Player Two [02/11/23]
I've never been so nervous to read something as I was to read this bonus level. But being here now I can rest is despair and not in the agony I was worried about. I really enjoyed the developments in this chapter and the directions taken relative to everyone - new appearances and old alike. Also, my...
- Sat Oct 28, 2023 8:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Counter Breaker [31/5/24]
- Replies: 43
- Views: 60729
Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Ludonarrative Dissonance [24/10/23]
Been meaning to leave this comment for a bit now, so I'll get right into it. First off, really enjoyed this story. When we first met Saki in Flutter I thought she'd be the type of character we'd just see a few times, hate, and move on from. But the recent expansions to her character in Flutter and n...