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Chapter 52: Quieres Buscar un Novio Ramen? Burger? Rice? Or pasta? Hmm… It’s so hard to decide! Mindlessly spinning my pen around, I find myself staring blankly at the whiteboard, my mind already teleported to the cafeteria several streets across. I hate studying~~~~!!!! Why do I have to study ling...

Thanks for proofreading, I fixed most of it I think. And yeah I think that having a chapter be what it needs to be instead of dragging it out for too long is important, but long can be decent as well if you revise it a few times, and read it over thoroughly. I'm still experimenting with length, I t...

Chapter 51: Very Tough Assignment “Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing, Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing…” “NO!!! PLEASE, SPARE ME!!!” I try to run away from the lethal attack of the flesh-eating giant cell phone, but my feet won’t listen to me. “Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing, Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing…” It’s getting closer! Why is the ph...

Hey, I actually did read some of your writing beforehand and it was quite nice, thanks for commenting. I'm still learning of course but I do agree that putting the name in the title probably looks better. Yup, It looks way better this way. I was more "inspired" by Sisterhood in the regard...

Chapter 50: The Great Escape After my vision gets restored, I find myself locked in a closed room. I look around. There are quite a lot of stuff here. Let’s investigate them one by one. There’s a green door in front of me. It’s locked, unsurprisingly. I need to find the key that belongs to this doo...

Hey there! It's great to see somebody writing something similar to what I did and am still doing. I'm also writing a Sisterhood plot story starting from Shizune's bad end , so it's great to see how the same plot will apply to Rin's story. I really like how the music is integrated into the story, and...

That Japanese bit in the middle was really jarring - especially since the whole of the story is supposed to be in Japanese... A bit as if suddenly learning that up to this point they all were speaking English^^° Understood. The story is in Japanese. They're all speaking Japanese. I was trying to de...

Chapter 49: A Kind Gentleman “It’s 1500 yen, please.” I take out two 1000 yen banknotes to the cashier. He gives me the change of a 500 yen coin and the shopping bag, which I take with my left hand. I’m about to check the items inside the bag when I discover something is wrong. I carefully feel the...

Chapter 48: No Surname No Problem I take out a small mirror from my bag to check my makeup. I bought this mirror when I went sightseeing in Kyoto last year. Hisao notices and gives me a thumbs-up. “You look fine. Don’t worry.” Alright then. I put it back into my bag. My reunion with Hisao didn’t tu...

Chapter 47: A Friendly Reunion Dear Hisao, How are you doing? I saw you on TV. Congratulations on winning the JUSC! You probably don’t know yet, but I’m now studying in Midori University, which you just competed against. I watched the live broadcast to support my schoolmates, but you surprised me! ...

Chapter 46: Clutch “Three minutes left!” While the staff hurry to perform final checks on their equipment, I close my eyes in an attempt to calm myself down. This is it, the final battle. Shizune is watching. My parents are watching. Lilly is listening through TV. Students of Kasshoku are watching ...

The first part of chapter 43 felt like a lot of people chaotically talking over one another. If you were going for that, congratulations, you succeeded. Problem is, in real life when people do that I simply tune them out, and that's exactly what I did here... I was simulating Lilly. Since she's bli...

Chapter 45: Lovers for One Night “Bzzzt.” “Mmm…” A vibration wakes me up from deep sleep. I slowly open my eyes, realizing that I’m not sleeping on a bed. Rather, I’m sleeping in the classroom. My neck is in pain. My book is wet. How long have I been asleep? I try my very best lifting my tired eyes...

Chapter 44: Proper Voters “Blank ballot.” “Invalid ballot.” “Blank ballot.” As the Student Council representative announces the contents of the ballots in front of everybody at the plaza, I can see that the school administrators, who come to supervise the ballot counting, do not look happy at all. ...

Chapter 43: Frenemy Reunion “This is all for today’s class. Please complete the assignments on pages 20 to 22. The deadline is next Friday.” So, “Assignments on page 20-22, deadline next Friday.” Got it. After typing it on the typewriter, I take the generated Braille paper and put it into my folder...