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by Decadent Albatros
Mon Jul 06, 2015 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
Replies: 376
Views: 255417

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots!

Well, I genuinely think that Hanako can easily react like this, so in my opinion this isn't that much of an OOC behavior, not that I care about it that much since I honestly enjoyed this one-shot! Forgive me as I say this, but this is your first work that I read so Akio is a new character for me. R...
by Decadent Albatros
Mon Jul 06, 2015 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
Replies: 376
Views: 255417

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots!

Well, I genuinely think that Hanako can easily react like this, so in my opinion this isn't that much of an OOC behavior, not that I care about it that much since I honestly enjoyed this one-shot! Forgive me as I say this, but this is your first work that I read so Akio is a new character for me. Re...
by Decadent Albatros
Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)
Replies: 51
Views: 20240

Re: Decadent Albatros' collection of Oneshots!

Always good to see new writers and have so much to read! However, paragraphing is important so that readers don't get confronted with dense slabs of text. As my mother used to say: one paragraph, one key point. And also, I've noticed that most people put one story per post; in future if someone wan...
by Decadent Albatros
Sat Jul 04, 2015 3:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)
Replies: 51
Views: 20240

Re: Decadent Albatros' collection of Oneshots!

First of all, welcome to the forums! :D Please enjoy your stay, try not to make too much of a mess or the Cook will fry you :wink: Anyway, stories. I'm going to echo Mirage's opinions on them - the writing's pretty good, even if the concepts aren't the best you could have used. However, I gotta say...
by Decadent Albatros
Sat Jul 04, 2015 3:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)
Replies: 51
Views: 20240

Re: Decadent Albatros' collection of Oneshots!

#2 is a story about a husband who gets into trouble with his wife over his hobby. Coincidentally the husband is named Hisao and the wife is named Hanako, but other than that there's not much to connect the story to KS. And is it really that much of a surprise that they'd announce a sequel to Dark S...
by Decadent Albatros
Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)
Replies: 51
Views: 20240

Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)

So, first of all hello to everyone! I've been lurking the forums for quite a while and I've finally decided to join the forums. I started writing Fan Fictions and I've been posting them in various places, so I think it's about time I would share them here, too. Keep in mind that I'm still new in thi...