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Hey I'm new here and am working on a story I guess. Any constructive criticism would be great!!! WALL OF TEXT MFW when WoT: :roll: The main problem is that paragraphs help establish flow and break up the text into units of expression. If the whole thing is one run-on paragraph, it's like a breathle...

Hey I'm new here and am working on a story I guess. Any constructive criticism would be great!! As I arose from my bed I slapped my alarm clock with a lazy arm. It was time for one last morning run with Emi today I remembered as I jumped out of bed and started to put on my gym clothes. Today is the ...