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by Mohn Jadden
Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
Replies: 5
Views: 3012

Re: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)

I'll say this much, it's different. I didn't mind the change in perspective changes too much. I think it can work in a prologue sort of thing. Just don't keep doing it for every chapter, as it would get old fast. Yeah, I would've posted the second chapter I wrote, but it's on a second computer. I'l...
by Mohn Jadden
Tue Sep 02, 2014 2:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
Replies: 5
Views: 3012

Re: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)

Looking at this, I seem to have a problem with length.

Also it might be shit.
by Mohn Jadden
Tue Sep 02, 2014 2:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
Replies: 5
Views: 3012

War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)

To: Zephyr14@unix.com Subject: S Job It’s on. --- Raindrops pattered against a wide window, driven on by coastal winds. The view revealed by the paned glass would’ve been majestic, overlooking the bay near Kyoto, if the low-lying clouds hadn’t done their best in concealing it. Instead, it only made ...
by Mohn Jadden
Thu Jul 24, 2014 6:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 900083

Re: Random KS Discussion

So a day ago I downloaded Katawa Shoujo for the first time. Played through normally, and got Hanako's good ending. Afterwards though... http://i.imgur.com/MYGUToD.gif <- Hisao I mean, that was seriously the closest I've ever come to crying over media. The second I told my teamspeak buddies I finishe...