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This is the fourth part of Lilly's arc in 'After the Dream', my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic. It partly overlaps with Shizune's arc here . Lilly 4: Timing (2024) It is a truth privately acknowledged that a Catholic young lady (or even one of middle years and no longer so very Catholic) carries a l...

She died of an overdose of blood thinners? That's a *really* nasty way to go. Coumadin is rat poison. You start bleeding from random parts of your body. Not pretty. And blood thinners actually help prevent stroke. http://www.strokecenter.org/patients/stroke-treatment/stroke-medications/anticoagulan...

Oh, excellent. It's like doing KS all over again but with new and wonderful things to discover. The juggling act, a polygon rather than a triangle: you're keeping a balance I would never be able to attempt myself.

This is the third part of Lilly's arc in 'After the Dream', my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic. Lilly 3: Trapdoor (2018) This is quite amusing, and I like being amused. It’s always good to keep busy, to do work that is useful. My sister isn’t quite like that; she works because she feels she has to. “...

That was pretty powerful. I got the feels. From a poem/1shot to a full Shizune life story. personally, I liked how you portrayed Shizune's feelings towards Hisao and his untimely end. nothing to Wahaha about :cry: I think Shizune had a genuine canonical attraction to Hisao in all routes. What I was...

For story purposes, I'm more interested in how Shizune, deprived of a major stereo-perceptive sense, copes with it. Her eyesight and sense of touch and vibration must be very important to her. I've lived life with most of the usual perceptions, so I'm not in the best position for someone aspiring to...

Maybe things will make more sense with the context of the other parts, but, standing on its own, this is easily one of the most chilling, soulless incarnations of Shizune I've encountered. (edited) I think of her as showing slightly sociopathic, even psychopathic behaviour. But she's not a psychopa...

Liminaut wrote:Did Shizune have a mother? Maybe she burst fully-grown out of Jigoro's ego.

Pallas Shizune! Someone should do a visual image of that.

This is the seventh and last part of Shizune's main arc in 'After the Dream'. I would like to write more Shizune, but this completes my framework. Should you wish to fill in the blanks in the narrative, there are links in my sig below that will take you to the other arcs. Thanks! Shizune 7: Complet...

Needless to say, I didn't read all the way through, and I'm quite disappointed that the same author who treated Shizune with such care has made me even less accepting of Lilly than I had already been. I see there's a second part now... should I bother? Only if you want to. I'm in a way rather glad ...

“Yet who would have thought the old man to have had so much blood in him?” Ah, the Scottish play, for the lady who is now of Scotland! Excellent! :D One thing that may or may not be a hiccup: The long blonde girl Continuing to enjoy this! Thank you! I've had the great fortune to spend time in Scotl...

This is the second part of Lilly's arc in 'After the Dream', my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic. Lilly 2: Transform (2008) One of the lovely things about living in a large home in the country is the fact that you can do what you want without being frequently disturbed. The long blonde girl in the eve...

Heh, I had just re-read yours because of your latest chapter, and I was wondering what on earth could have kept Lilly away until Hisao's death... My guess is that, much like with national debts and yakuza loans, the interest payments on awkwardness compound to the point to where repayment becomes i...

For what it's worth, Katawa Shoujo is set in 2007, and Lilly turned 18 in February, before Hanako turned 18 during the VN. That means she was born in 1989. My leading theory is that her parents manipulated things to pass her off as developmentally disabled, to delay her entry into school. (Normally...

Heh...interesting to read this just as I'm bringing Lilly back to Yamaku in my own post-neutral-end fic. A quick note: I've always found it odd for someone who's trying to discover an artist to choose, as their first taste of their work, a piece that's entirely made up of their interpretations of o...