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monkeywitha6pack wrote:The small text makes it a lot harder to notice the grammar spelling and on top of that spellcheck fails

Yeeeeeeeeep, hence why I hate using the iPad.
q-p

"Fits of Many Varieties" by Riakai (WIP, unknown word count)
PoV: Hisao; Pairings: Hisao x Naomi, OC x OC; Begins: First day of Yamaku, at Hisao's home.
Remarks: Pseudo-Route, multiple OCs.

Eheheheheheh... Seems we've got similar ideas.
I'd love to read your fic, but I'm afraid I'd accidentally influence some of my own writing. Kinda like how Kunitaro in my story is borderline Kenta, from Tomorrow's Doom. XD

Glad to see I'm not the only one who writes on a iPad XD but I decided it wasn't best for grammatical reasons :lol: but I enjoy the path the route is taking. I only write on this thing on trips, I prefer computer typing. My iPad's nice, but... -Grammar/spelling issues -Text size (The chapter I wrot...

AnathRaema wrote:Great chapter. This is going to be like all the anime that started in October, that I'm watching. Patiently, yet excitedly waiting for my next fix. I'm like a fanfic drug addict.

*Grabs fan-fic heroin and injects into arm*
GOT MAH FIX

Mader Levap wrote:

Riakai wrote:After that hilarious ordeal, everyone

Everyone what?

Dahell... It must've messed up, I had a sort of time passer thingy there .-.

Bluetooth keyboard. You can get quite good ones nowadays. Or use the Camera Connection Kit with a USB keyboard. I've seen some hilarious examples of IBM terminal keyboards (122 keys, 9.3 pounds) converted to USB and then interfaced to iPads and iPhones that way. (I usually do my writing either on a...

"Shut up Kun!" The point being made here is that the -kun suffix is a Japanese honorific commonly used for (among other things) friendly nicknames and mascots, so you have both an unlikely abbreviation and a source of puns, both straight-language and cross-language, massive enough to make...

No major grammar issues, but some stuff about the pacing caught my eye: Naomi's probably got a thing for you, man. Wow, that was quick... "Shut up Kun!" Interesting name ;-) I don't think it's in use in Japan, though. "We should probably head back to our classes," Did I miss a t...

AnathRaema wrote:

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Now it's time to join the waiting game like everyone else. I don't mind, if it's for a story of such quality as this.

Waiting has always been half the fun.

I hate waiting ._.

NOTHING TO SEE HERE

Mirage_GSM wrote:The OP does not count in this calculation. "...=2" means you're linking to the second reply.

I figured that much out, regardless, I fixed the link to link directly to the 2nd Part, and this time it shows the whole post this time.

That's odd. Oh well, switched to what I was trying to get.

I posted Part 2 of Chapter 1, it's edited into that 2nd Post.
I tried to do the "Show, not tell" thing a bit more this time, but it's a conscious effort.
HERE YA' GO~!

This isn't bad. Personally I prefer seeing Natsume and Naomi as an item, but obviously that's not the sole interpretation. I'll admit that I don't particularly care for how differently Hisao acts in the beginning; like forgetmenot, I've probably read "Enter Stage Left" a thousand times, s...