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Sounds interesting. I have so much to read that I don't know if I'll be able to follow until Act 4 is out, lol Eheheh... That... That'll be a while. I don't even have the story planned out that far... I'm still planning the Relationship Part of it. I have Act 1 planned out, and part of Act 2. partb...

[Placeholder for eventual doodles of the Naomi x Hisao, Naomi x Natsume, and eventual Naomi x Hisao x Natsume.]

The Room 19 thing is an oops on both our parts (I'm his editor) p-q Might be he was afraid to mess with Hisao's deep AF character. Seeing as he said he's not usually a writer, he may not've wanted to take that deepa plunge. (Kinda like me when I try to draw a super-duper-uber-popular character that'...

Mind you, this piece isn't really long enough to develop any legitimate concerns, but I do want to caution you against making Hisao too fresh. To the point where he's overtly smacking the reader across the face with what he's thinking. Hisao is a subtle guy- his actions and internal monologue illus...

Silentcook wrote:Heavily seconding the "inline notes, what the fuck" motion. Seriously, where will you people want to stick those next?

Don't answer. >.<

*Puts notes in Title, Table of Contents, and in the middle of a piece of fan-art*

The inline comment was because I wasn't 100% sure on the Bad Hisao thing; I thought I'd removed it, but oh-teh-wells, removing it now~

And thanks for all the complements, they're the best thing I can receive.


Except coffee. I love my coffee.

Edited the two chapters into one, as that makes it the right length for me. Usually doesn't take me this long to write this much, but t'is in the past~. *=The Point of Derision from Canon~! As I sit the uniform down upon the blue bed-sheet I momentarily stop: So. First day. Woo. I should probably b...

So, here's this. Another Pseudo-Route. Yippeeeeeeeeeeeee. This route is going to focus on Naomi, the epileptic class mate of Hisao in 3-3 who's friends with Natsume. The pair are in the Newspaper Club, so I definitely plan to implement that, somewhat heavily, in Hisao's next clandestine relationshi...

Fair enough, but I usually don't have a formal Editor . I just have a few of my friends interested in my writing read it. They're far from reserved when it comes to opinions. And it's a secret, I'll PM you it if you reallllly wanna know. Namely decided on it since this char's in game (No sprite) and...

I'mma he~.
And I'm content with editing all these for you, I need to get some finesse back into my brain, as I'm starting up a Pseudo-Route soon, along with a partner of mine. I'd like to not need an editor on my own pieces

Yeah, that's a bit of a problem. As I said, I'm practically going in blind. See, I only have one odd year of english education, and all the others went into Deutch and French. So I'm not that fluent. Maybe that is a good excuse to become better at it. If you want to edit it and make it more managea...

I like the premise, but the grammar and spelling can be a bit much at points. If you'd like, I can edit it for you. Like I said, not bad, 'specially for a first attempt.

I looooooooooooove it. Spent my day catching up on this Fic.
Nice start to Act 2, Suzu is rather funny in this fic. Not as deep and gloomy as in Scissorlip's portrayal.
Keep dem updates roooooooollin'.

....Whoops. I'm hooked on another WIP fan-fic. I sweaaar I'm masochistic sometimes... I loved it though, very good way to make the somewhat funny meeting in Canon turn into a very serious thing in the story. Very good cliffhanger too. Hopefully I don't bash my skull on a wall in anxiety before the n...

The most recent chapter is enormous (25 pages/12350 words and counting - versus a total so far of 160 pages/76600 words) with a few major happenings, so going has been slow. I'd like to imagine that I'm almost ready to send it off to my editors, but not making any promises right now. I do want to g...