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by Bad Apple
Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.
Replies: 22
Views: 8496

Re: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.

It doesn't seem prestigious either, as Hisao seems to just waltz in (although that could be due to his aptitude in sciences etc.). I was waiting for someone to mention this. Both of Hisao's parents work long hours. The Nakais' financial status possibly allows for Hisao's entry and medical costs, bu...
by Bad Apple
Fri Jul 26, 2013 4:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a Fan Fic
Replies: 19
Views: 14377

Re: Recommend a Fan Fic

What would it be like if it was not Hisao but Iwanako who had arrhythmia, had that heart attack on the snow, and went to Yamaku instead? That's what Leaty asked when formulating Mean Time to Breakdown . Go read it and review it. Seriously, it needs more love. Notice how I'm the first second one to m...
by Bad Apple
Thu Jul 25, 2013 11:59 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.
Replies: 22
Views: 8496

Re: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.

Well, keep in mind this is a school for disabled kids, one of at least a few. It's not going to be something people try to get into constantly and are declined. Comparing it to another high school / College would be silly. It's not like disabilities are few and far in between. The definition of wha...
by Bad Apple
Thu Jul 25, 2013 7:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.
Replies: 22
Views: 8496

Re: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.

We kind of sort of have answers to both of those. Excellent sir, excellent. The community offers its thanks for delivering so speedily. I didn't expect the Yamaku student body to be so microscopic, even by the standards I was used to. That's astonishing. If we use 3-3 as a basis, there are 18 seats...
by Bad Apple
Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:30 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.
Replies: 22
Views: 8496

Yamaku student body, architecture, etc.

I never thought I'd actually come up with an idea for a KS thread, yet here I am after accidentally stumbling into one such idea. Weird how things sometimes turn out. I was hanging out all by my lonesome when my random stream of thoughts carried me to the only time I ever had an art teacher*. This l...
by Bad Apple
Mon Jul 22, 2013 4:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 430290

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

Yes, but The Shallow End was the beginning of Iwanako's stay at Yamaku. So... what's on the other side? Ah. I see what you did there. That's, well, deep. http://i.imgur.com/7uwwM7y.gif Aaand cue Cold Iron . I'm really digging this revision. It really does read more like like someone's dying thought...
by Bad Apple
Mon Jul 22, 2013 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 430290

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

I think a lot of them may have forgotten that this version of Iwanako (not that there are a lot of them out there) spent all her time in the hospital watching movies and such, rather than reading. Four months is a long time to spend cooped up in a hospital room, and if we assume she spent as much t...
by Bad Apple
Sat Jul 20, 2013 5:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 430290

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

I can't believe you guys are arguing about a single comma. Literally. There is no singular accepted use for the serial comma; it varies between professions and dialects. A simple Internet search confirms that. This isn't a government document or a journalistic article, it's fanfiction. Writing style...
by Bad Apple
Sat Jul 20, 2013 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 430290

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

Oh damn, should've checked one more time in the morning. I've been eagerly awaiting this one ever since your reply saying it's finished. I see other posters have proofread this chapter, so I'll just move straight to my thoughts and impressions (and nitpicking). In search of a solution, I glance at t...
by Bad Apple
Sun Jul 14, 2013 12:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Replies: 37
Views: 25455

Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais,

Mirage_GSM wrote:Oh no! Someone found IT...
This.

Why would you?! :lol:

And now, I let it return to the abyss where it belongs...
by Bad Apple
Sun Jul 14, 2013 12:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 190760

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 09/05/2013)

I've seen quite a few people bring up this point. Yes, if Hanako and Hisao were more vocal and open thing would have gone easier for them ... and if they were from Krypton, they could fly. These two people are not good at expression their thoughts to others. if they were, they wouldn't even be in t...
by Bad Apple
Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 190760

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

I've been following this one for a while (as a long-time lurker), and I must say I like the concept. A simple POV flip, and suddenly Hanako's route is fresh again. Any constructive criticism I may have had (this fanfic's been running for almost a year, so my memory's fuzzy) has been long addressed b...
by Bad Apple
Wed Jul 10, 2013 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 430290

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Watch, now I've scared newbies from ever bumping my threads ever again. http://i.imgur.com/yzbtGJO.gif Oh really? :P I've been lurking these forums for over a year now, principally the Fanfiction board. While I've read dozens of KS fanfics over the past year, this is the fanfic I'm most looking for...