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Not much to say really because its so short, mainly just that it seems to stop quite abruptly.

forgetmenot wrote: The only obvious ending is that he rejects both Hanako and Emi and makes sweet, sweet love to Kenji. Or Mutou.

Or Kenji AND Mutou.

It is nice to see a Natsume fic. I initially assumed it would be Naomi x Natsume, but this works too. Like the other people said, decent opening. Just enough to have my attention.

Great chapter. Really liked the interaction between Hanako and Emi, as short as it was. I instinctively am pulling for Hanako, but you succeeded in me rooting for both of them at points, so I'll likely feel bad for whichever one doesn't get him. Though since Hanako already missed out on him once, to...

Lianam wrote:

AntonSlavik020 wrote:Kinda weird that it was a one-shot from the perspective of an original character, though.

Ahem.

Oh, OK. Never mind then. I actually know why Takashi is, so I should have recognized him.

That was a sweet little story. Kinda weird that it was a one-shot from the perspective of an original character, though. Kinda makes me wonder why you decided to go that direction instead of just using Hisao.

To be honest, it does show that Rumor Mill wasn't meant to be good, because it wasn't. It is easily my least favorite of the stories. Turning Miki, a character I usually like, into an absolute jerk(I'm not sure if swearwords are allowed) pretty much killed any chance of me enjoying it.

Great chapter. Loved the back and forth between Shizune and Hisao trying to convince Misha, and Shizune's reaction afterwords.

OOC = Out Of Character. Not sure about IIRC.

One question I have is how Hanako knew of Hisao's heart condition, since he didn't follow her or Lilly's path? He tended to be very private about it.

Unfortunately I have a hard time liking something that involves someone getting an abortion. It's actually one of the things I'm most passionate about. I don't want to start a political debate on the KS forums though, so I'll leave it at that.

sg1cat wrote:
LIkewise, I felt the ending didn't have enough closure.

Yeah, that's a large reason why there's such a disparity between my opinion of Shizune and her route. I really like her, but her route is just so unsatisfying.

Loved this chapter. My favorite yet. I never did like how Hisao never mentioned his condition to Shizune and Misha.

I had a classmate why started growing grey hair in 7th grade and I started growing grey hair in my early 20s. Granted that's the minority, but still.

-Hisao seems to have realized a crush on her pretty quickly. Slow it down friend, it's better to take things like that slow so they're believable. Well In my experiences, crushes can happen rather quickly. At least they tended to for me, especially while I was in high school. Though that said, it d...