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Really good chapter. I also really liked how Hisao's heart is brought up, especially considering him and Shizune are going to get married, it's a legitimate thing for him to bring up. Great graveyard scene in general, really.

Not sure how I feel about the rather downer intro to this story. And seeing as how I really didn't like the "true ending" you gave to the Suzu epilogue, I'm somewhat leery about where this one is headed, but I'll give it s chance.

Very interesting start to this. If the rest of the stories have as unique a premise, color me interested.

Great to see this story updated again. This is one of my favorite ongoing stories on the site. With that said, good chapter. I'm really looking forward to their second time in the city. though that's probably a few chapters away(it's been a while since I've played the route).

I actually liked the dream scene. It being confusing makes sense, since dreams rarely make sense. That said, very enjoyable chapter. Nice to see this story updated again. The banter between Hisao and Kagami.

dewelar wrote: Don't forget, in Lilly's route, Hideaki knows that Hisao has a heart condition.

I thought he just guessed. Like Rin did, but correctly.

I may be confusing head-canon with events that actually occurred in the VN, but isn't Shizune aware of his condition because she has access to basic medical records for student council duties? Technically that is never said in the VN. It's implied that she knows since she looks worried after bumpin...

I'd enjoy more of these. I mainly didn't comment because I didn't have an account yet when I read them.

Ah. That actually makes sense. Looking forward to it either way.

Cemetery scene? The only one I can think of was the one in Emi's route, and I'm not sure what that has to do with Shizune's mom.

Really interested to see how the conversation with Shizune's mom goes. It's interesting you included her, as most fics tend to just assume she died, since she isn't at the house and divorce is VERY rare in Japan, though there's no reason she can't be alive. I think I've only read one story that incl...

Leaty wrote:

dewelar wrote:Eh, considering they appeared in Weekend at Hisao's, probably not.

That fic doesn't exist to me.

Any particular reason why? I loved it. Shizune doesn't get enough love.

There are? I know the one near the end of Shizune's route. Who's the other one? The blind girl in the Astronomy club in the Suriko fanfic. It was literally just posted. http://i.imgur.com/nff8gli.gif Oh OK. For some reason the way it was worded made me think there were two Aois in the game. Just a ...

Leaty wrote: Also, since we now know that there are two students named Aoi at Yamaku, the One Steve Limit is subverted.

There are? I know the one near the end of Shizune's route. Who's the other one?

Chapter 2: Little Round Mirrors; Part 2 "See yourself reflected in one, there's a hole in the middle you can't seem to fill." [/i] [No. I was just going to say that my younger brother wears tights.] … Tights. Her younger brother wears tights. [He’s thirteen.] Her brother wears tights and ...